Hi everyone, I'm applying to LMU and those are two of my supplements essays, I'm not really good with essays and my English needs improvement, but I'd be really grateful if you comment and give me some advice on how to make them better. - Thank you
1st question: Your reason for wishing to attend LMU.
2nd question: How you came to select your major?
To the second question.
I have always been captured in the magic of movies. For something to have such a far reach and powerful effect on people amazes me. When a person really connects with a character in a film, it can change their mood, opinion or even to some extent their general views and the power if stories to move, to entertain, to explain, to offer a glimpse of something foreign and unknown has always intrigued me. I want to know every detail, every effect and how its made. Therefore, I plan to major i Film and Television Production and I know that is the best choice for me.
At the age of fourteen, I was able to further develop my love for movies. I started my journey as an athlete. I spent most of my time on training camps and aside of the long hours of practice, there was not much to do. Movies were the one thing, making me completely isolate myself from everything around me. I can not imagine myself doing anything else in the future than turning my imagination into reality. I am also excited about meeting new, creative and open minded people, who are ready to share their views and ides.
I have three goals for College. First, I want to learn how to fully express my ideas. I have always known that imagination and hard work is the key to success and by learning how to express my ideas better, I believe that I can achieve everything that I want. Second, I want to be more creative of what I do. I know that by learning from a creative people, I would become one. Finally, I want to learn how to fully have an impact on people with my work.
I expect to work with amazing, experienced people and learn everything that they has to offer. I know that College studies will prepare me for my future career. After earning my degree,I plan to find the best job for me and be able to create amazing things that can touch people's minds and hearts. I believe that the skills I learn in College will be extremely useful in helping me to establish that.
Several reasons have shaped my rationale as why I deem LMU the perfect match for me. From what I have learned from my research,don't phrase it like this and use from twice. I think you could do without mentioning researching the school LMU provides its students with a great learning environment. Ensuring that every student exceeds in their chosen field of study. this is a fragment Also, one of the things that grabbed me immediately immediately grabbed my attention, was the indescribable beauty of the campus.The wonderful (use a better word) architecture and the great diversity were enough to help me understand that I don't need to look anymore. reword this The location of LMU is another attraction to apply to this extraordinary university.I am considering a major in Film and Television Production and the fact that LMU is in the heart of this industry will provide many opportunities for me.is it in the heart location wise? does the school have connections? I look forward in being part of festivals like: "Sundance", "Cannes" or events like: Truth and Fiction on Screen, Film outside the frame, Monday night series. I know that, I will be in good hands considering all the amazing award-winning faculty members and I believe that LMU will offer me a well-rounded education and enable me to expand my thought and creativity process.
