Environmental issues, water resources. Brief statement about personal goal and academic goal

Environmental issues, particularly with water resources, have always fascinated me since I was in High school. I studied agricultural science because of my deep-seated interest in agricultural and environmental issues. I excelled in mathematics, chemistry and the natural sciences, hence my interest for bio-engineering sciences. My academic goal is to be a Bio-resource engineer and I believe strongly that your institution will be able to equip me with much of what is needed to become the best Bio-resource engineer. My personal goal is to help exploit properly and safely the natural resources in my country and to also help develop the underprivileged communities which are endowed with the natural resources to a better standard.

Hey Evans, I think we can still write more if there is a word limit then just be focused on your goals. What I think you can rephrase your words like starting from the first line, no need to tell high school but tell why water resources got you interested in one line. you said you were particularly fascinated by water but then you shifted to agricultural which is a broader concept than only water and then you shifted to bio engineering. You do not need to mention what you did just try to relate your goal with your background. Your goal is to become bio resource engineer but why? Then you ended up in natural resources , so separately your lines are good but they cant be related to each other. So try to interrelate your background and your career goal. What is your goal and what have you done so far or learned to achieve that goal or how you came closer to your goal. Thats what I think. Hope this helps. Good luck :)

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Environmental issues, especially water resources have always fascinated me. Water is a vital component of all living things and therefore must be managed effectively to ensure its sustainability for future generations. I have a strong interest in Bio-resource engineering because, I am more versed in the agricultural field especially and other fields relating to bio-resource engineering. I believe strongly that your institution will endow me with much more of what is required to become a professional Bio-resource engineer. My personal goal is to contribute towards ensuring that my country's natural resources are exploited in an environmentally sound manners and also, help develop the underprivileged communities which are endowed with the natural resources to a better standard.