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In an essay of 300 words or fewer (approximately 1950 characters with spaces), write about your goals for your time at Queen's University and beyond. Your answer will be evaluated for content and writing style
During my time at Queen's, I will do everything I can to fully maximize my university experience. Through balancing academics and extra-curricular activities, I will take every opportunity to try new things as well as explore the Kingston community. I will take classes to help me fulfill my dream of going to medical school to become an orthopedic surgeon. I also would love to investigate international opportunities, whether it be doing an exchange or volunteering abroad. I love experiencing new cultures and I believe that an experience like that would benefit me greatly and enhance my university experience.
On top of fulfilling my academic goals, during my time at Queens I plan on participating in clubs and intermural sports. Although interested by many of the almost endless amounts of extracurricular activities, Queen's Free the Children and Queen's Veg Community sound like clubs where I could contribute greatly as they both involve things that I am passionate about. Furthermore, I would love to find an organization in the Kingston area to volunteer for as I believe volunteering to make an impact in the community is an important thing to do.
In conclusion, over my time at Queen's, I will strive to participate in all aspects of university. Through academics and extra-curricular activities I will maximize my experience and contribute my skills and knowledge to hopefully give a lasting impact to the university.
In an essay of 300 words or fewer (approximately 1950 characters with spaces), write about your goals for your time at Queen's University and beyond. Your answer will be evaluated for content and writing style
During my time at Queen's, I will do everything I can to fully maximize my university experience. Through balancing academics and extra-curricular activities, I will take every opportunity to try new things as well as explore the Kingston community. I will take classes to help me fulfill my dream of going to medical school to become an orthopedic surgeon. I also would love to investigate international opportunities, whether it be doing an exchange or volunteering abroad. I love experiencing new cultures and I believe that an experience like that would benefit me greatly and enhance my university experience.
On top of fulfilling my academic goals, during my time at Queens I plan on participating in clubs and intermural sports. Although interested by many of the almost endless amounts of extracurricular activities, Queen's Free the Children and Queen's Veg Community sound like clubs where I could contribute greatly as they both involve things that I am passionate about. Furthermore, I would love to find an organization in the Kingston area to volunteer for as I believe volunteering to make an impact in the community is an important thing to do.
In conclusion, over my time at Queen's, I will strive to participate in all aspects of university. Through academics and extra-curricular activities I will maximize my experience and contribute my skills and knowledge to hopefully give a lasting impact to the university.
