How do you expect The Art Institute of California -SF to help you attain your goal?

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Jun 23, 2011 #1

Hi! I really need some help in editing my essay. I have no idea what else should I put into my essay. Thank you very much in advance! :)

How do you expect your education at The Art Institute of California -San Francisco to help you attain your career goals?

I believe that getting into The Art Institute of California- San Francisco will help me in achieving my dream to become an Interior Designer.

Since I was young, being the person in charge of decorating my high school classrooms had always become my interest. Having friends and family to ask about my opinion in all types of designs is an everyday thing. With the encouragement and advice from my family, friends and my own interests in designing and decorating spaces, have made me choose Interior Design.

With creativity, imagination, dream and passion that I have in this field, I hope that after my graduation, I would be an inspiration for many people and to meet their needs in providing solutions to achieve a meaningful design. I am looking forward until the day I would be able to enjoy my working life as a designer, designing restaurant, houses and even customizing furniture.

I am sure that opportunity given through the programs that I will be learning during the next 3 years at The Art Institute of California -San Francisco will equip me well to obtain recognition as an International Interior Designer.

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Jun 25, 2011 #2

I believe that getting into The Art Institute of California- San Francisco will help me in achieving my dream to become an Interior Designer.

Since I was young, being the person in charge of decorating my high school classrooms had always been my interest.

Having friends and family to ask about my opinion in all types of designs is an everyday experience.

I made some changes to those sentences.. but I also suggest getting some more raw material to use. You should develop your plan some more. Make a plan based on some case studies. Look at the accomplishments of some of the artists whom you admire. Show that you are reading research studies and books about design.

:-)