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How do you expect your education at the Art Insitute of -- to help you attain your career goals?



jasminenw97 1 / -  
Nov 14, 2014   #1
The topic of the essay is: How do you expect your education at the Art Insitute of -- to help you attain your career goals?

I have written 193 words and hopefully pinpointed direct answers to the question. In what ways can I improve? What other information could be added, if any?

From an early age, I have had a passion for art. It began with drawing and expanded to graphic designing, painting, and even sculpting. After receiving my first digital camera, I discovered a new-found love for photography. Exploring my creative abilities lead me to pursue a career in Fine Arts. After taking into consideration what other colleges had to offer- programs, the environment, employment opportunities- I decided that the Art Institute of --- would best suit me.

At the Art Institute of ---, I anticipate to be engaged in rigorous courses and real-world experiences that will refine my artistic abilities and teach me exactly what I need to know in my chosen field. I hope to learn the skills employers are looking for and build relationships and professional networks for job opportunities. I want to be challenged and I want my creativity to be embraced to motivate me in achieving my goals.

I expect my education at this institute to help me attain the credentials I need for employment to work alongside experts. I wish to carry the information and skill-set instilled in me to enter into the visual art industry with confidence.

shachar183 3 / 6  
Nov 15, 2014   #2
After taking into consideration what other colleges had to offer-: programs, the environment,and employment opportunities- I decided that the Art Institute of --- would best suit me.

Overall you didn't do anything bad in this essay, but nothing extraordinary either. What specific things you wish to do? Maybe a famous professor who inspired you to go to this institution? Maybe focus on certain aspect of Photography that you wish to improve?

Basically the main problem of this essay that it almost doesn't say anything unique about yourself.


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