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It's hard to comprehend how excited I am going to college. I have two main goals I hope to accomplish as an undergraduate in BU. I want to be able to experience diversity of cultures in BU and at the same time able to support myself financially, but most importantly, I want have an enough amount of time dedicated to helping people who needed.
By going to BU, I hope to explore more of what the world offers, I want to be more expose to other cultures, become more outgoing and sociable. BU will help me earn a degree in education that will help me support myself financially and help others at the same time.
Before I came to the U.S., I lived in China. There, every Sunday I go to church, the church locates in a neighborhood similar to a slum, and we would come across a dozen homeless people at a time. I would always give them money but the situation there just seems to get worse. On one particular Sunday I saw a boy around my age going through the garbage hoping to find anything useful. While looking at him, I thought to myself, I could have been that unfortunate boy. At that moment, I decided to dedicate my life to help others who needed.
In high school, I excel in all my art classes especially in graphic design, I enjoyed the class so much I want to major in the graphic design field. I first didn't feel strong about decision because I couldn't really do much to help people when I major in graphic design. But wanting to do what I love at the same time, I decided to compromise the two. I want to become a graphic designer who designs posters and through other media to promote awareness for people suffering from poverty. Since I had already started on this path, it will be great to be able to continue working for this cause if I get into BU.
Right now is already the twenty-first century, and there is still a huge amount of people suffering from poverty. I have strong faith that through BU I will be able to do my part to do my part to stop poverty in the world. My intended career might seem very useless in a big picture, but I believe individual matters, every bit will help.
It's hard to comprehend how excited I am going to college. I have two main goals I hope to accomplish as an undergraduate in BU. I want to be able to experience diversity of cultures in BU and at the same time able to support myself financially, but most importantly, I want have an enough amount of time dedicated to helping people who needed.
By going to BU, I hope to explore more of what the world offers, I want to be more expose to other cultures, become more outgoing and sociable. BU will help me earn a degree in education that will help me support myself financially and help others at the same time.
Before I came to the U.S., I lived in China. There, every Sunday I go to church, the church locates in a neighborhood similar to a slum, and we would come across a dozen homeless people at a time. I would always give them money but the situation there just seems to get worse. On one particular Sunday I saw a boy around my age going through the garbage hoping to find anything useful. While looking at him, I thought to myself, I could have been that unfortunate boy. At that moment, I decided to dedicate my life to help others who needed.
In high school, I excel in all my art classes especially in graphic design, I enjoyed the class so much I want to major in the graphic design field. I first didn't feel strong about decision because I couldn't really do much to help people when I major in graphic design. But wanting to do what I love at the same time, I decided to compromise the two. I want to become a graphic designer who designs posters and through other media to promote awareness for people suffering from poverty. Since I had already started on this path, it will be great to be able to continue working for this cause if I get into BU.
Right now is already the twenty-first century, and there is still a huge amount of people suffering from poverty. I have strong faith that through BU I will be able to do my part to do my part to stop poverty in the world. My intended career might seem very useless in a big picture, but I believe individual matters, every bit will help.
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