FAMU's FUTURE FIRST GENERATION STUDENT....HOPEFULLY......ESSAY PROMPT 2

Describe an activity, interest, experience, or achievement in your life (this could be a book, a movie, or an activity or experience at work, home, or school) that has been particularly meaningful for you.

Note: This essay can't be more than 250 words.

I have been involved in many activities, had many interests, experienced many things, and had countless achievements in my life. The achievement that was most meaningful to me is writing and self-publishing my very first book. Being around different people with different life experiences inspired me to write a novel that students my age could relate to or be entertained by. My novel "The Life of Kai (Part 1)" was an achievement that separated other students from me. The novel helped me transfer my thoughts along with other people experiences and create this interesting and mind-blowing story. This achievement does not only bring happiness to myself but happiness to my family. Now my mom can say "My son has written a book!" and feel like she is one of the greatest parents in the world.

this a good attempt of writing, but the introduction distracted me a little bit and need to be more specific and oriented. The other thing in my opinion, if you could dive a little bit deeper in the detailed of your experience in writing the book

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good luck and hope always for the best

... I think you can remove this line since you have a word count constraint. This one really does not add much value for your response. Talk more about the book. Tell them the challenges you faced when writing it and what it means to you now. What sort of impact it made on your life....