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Favorite book and movie. I can't surpass 225 characters per mini-paragraph!! Keep that in mind!!



Davidg021 3 / 4  
Aug 16, 2016   #1
Luckily enough for me, my favorite book is also my favorite movie. Introduced to me by my Mom when I was younger, The Little Prince is one of the first books I have ever read. It opened up my imagination in so many ways.


My favorite source of inspiration is undoubtedly my Mom. She has always been pushing me to do my greatest and to never give up. I can also look at her as an example because of the many feats she has accomplished.


My weekends are very different from others in the sense that I complete my weekend work, whether about school or not, on Friday nights. I then spend the rest of the weekend relaxing or enjoying my free time with friends.

The compliment I am proudest of receiving is "You're such a wonderful person", from a friend I just met. It doesn't sound like much, but those words meant so much to me since I was so disconsolate at the time.


When encountered with a challenging experience, I normally rejuvenate quickly. I truly believe in the fact that rejuvenation is completely mental and with the right mindset you can refresh your mind and begin working again.


The uniform policy at my school is self-contradictory. They say not wearing a uniform is a distraction in the workplace yet, when someone doesn't wear the proper uniform they are put in the office until the end of the day.


I have been a part of a club that focuses on assisting underprivileged students. And just like I have done before, I would like to aid college students that aren't able to get textbooks and other supplies, by starting a fund.

ekalamarsyari11 72 / 101  
Aug 16, 2016   #2
... that I complete my weekend to work, whether about school or notdoing school's assigments or something else ,

on Friday nights. I then spend the rest of the weekend relaxing or enjoying my free time with friends.
i think it should be better to write:
then, i spend my Friday night for relaxing or enjoying my free time with friends

The compliment I am proudest of receiving is "You're such a wonderful person", from a friend I just met. It doesn't sound like much, but those words meant so much to me since I was so disconsolate at the time.

the best compliment that i ever had is......

I truly believe that in the fact rejuvenation is completely mental and with the right mindset you can refresh your mind and begin working again.

i am really sorry to say that i have a trouble to understand your writing story
i suggest you to pay attention to such verb - agreement and also you should more careful to use conjunction word such 'that'

good luck david


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