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Failed movie - Write a paragraph about a movie that makes you disappointed about


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Dec 17, 2023   #1
When i have free time,i have a habit of watching movies,from romantic to action.Most of them has interesting and meaningful content.But there is a film that i definitely never watch again.It made me collaspe all of my hopes before wwatching .Its story is about long distance love.I was excited to see how the film will explore the challenges and emotions that come with such relationships.however,The execution turned out to be disappointing.The characters lacked depth and chemistry,making it difficult to invest in their love story.Morover, I feel interested in movies with unique or surprising plots.But it did not touch my heart because they did not completely emphasize the theme of the movie.That loses the attraction of the film and does not leave an impression in the hearts of the viewer,Besides,the pacing was slow,making the already weak story drag on.Overall,this film failed to grasp the topic and express the emotions of the journey of love,leaving me feeling unsatisfied.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,835 4783  
Dec 17, 2023   #2
You were expected to write a simple movie review for this essay. Sa single paragraph that should have indicated:
1. The title of the movie
2. The character names
3. The plot and twist in the movie
4. How it was resolved
5. Why you were disappointed in the movie
If you review your presentation, you will find that you did not present any of these necessary information prior to your indicating why you were disappointed with the movie. Without the aforementioned information, the reader will not understand what you are talking about. By not including relevant information , your reader, who may already seen the movie, has no idea if they should agree with you or not. Those who have not seen the movie, will be even more confused by this presentation since it does not inform them about the important aspects of the movie presentation.


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