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Topic: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.
As I looked ahead to my future, I approached my education with a real sense of purpose and a keen desire to maximize my potential. I knew that through intense studying and tireless efforts, I could excel on the university entrance examination and earn a spot in Hanoi University of Technology (HUT), one of Vietnam's best universities. At that time, I felt a mix of pride in what I had accomplished and an eagerness to expand my intellectual horizons. I also expected a new active air as well as a new method of learning at the higher education. However, when the time came to begin my first day at HUT, I felt an acute sense of disappointment. Walking through the campus to classes, I encountered many nervous and tired eyes. After the teacher entered, he introduced himself quickly and gave my class the term catalog. Looking at the catalog, I did not believe my eyes. With only one experiment per month, dull lectures constituted most of the work. As I watched the teacher dictate notes, I felt as though I had not progressed from high school. Therefore, just after one month of this, I became frustrated by the lack of academic dynamism at HUT, and I began to lose my passion for earning a degree from HUT.
I continued to live this rather limiting and upsetting existence until the fateful day that I attended an American educational exhibition. Immediately impressed by how I saw American higher education described, my mind fixated on the presentation when I made my way back home. In the coming weeks, I spent a lot of time searching the Internet to gather information about the higher education in the United States. The more I explored, the more I become interested in American colleges and universities. I dreamed about learning from famous professors and next to ambitious and intelligent students from around the world. I wanted to engage the creative curriculums and test the outer limits of my own skills and abilities. So, in my mind, a dream of studying in America began.
I knew, though, that if I want to make this dream a reality, I have to become completely proficient in English. In order to do so, I began reading a lot of English books and periodicals, and this task, quite unintentionally broadened my horizons and sparked my curiosity about myriad subjects. Thus, gradually, I have developed my opinions about a wide range of topics, and enjoyed discussing them to both understand the underlying issues as well as defend my arguments. They are the methods of learning that I have awaited at an academic environment, where professors encourage students to express themselves and articulate their viewpoints.
In addition to having found out the prospect of studying abroad, I have discovered several important things. Firstly, I realize that I cannot succeed in this struggle without the support of my family, and in this regard I feel quite fortunate because my parents approved of my ideas and supported my decisions. Looking back on my life, I recognized the great degree to which my parents have encouraged me whenever I got into trouble and made me feel confident that I could succeed in school and in life. They have made many sacrifices for me so that I could have the best things. Secondly, I feel quite lucky and proud for having wonderful friends. Ms Linh assisted me a great deal, working long hours with me to hone and perfect my English skills as well serving as a comforting presence in my life during difficult periods. My friend Duc Anh supplied me with a lot of helpful information about English books as well as American colleges and Binh encouraged in my choice by sending me at least one inspiring message every day. Understanding the scope and commitment of my support network gave me an enormously uplifting feeling that has seen me through the ambitious endeavor to study in America.
The past year has presented me with real challenges, but it has also revealed some very essential things that I might otherwise have taken for granted or have never even noticed. From a frustrated and timid student, I have grown into an active and vigorous one. Having an obvious aim to pursue, a happy family to buttress me at hard times and wonderful friends to share happiness and sadness, I think I have found the meaning of life.
Topic: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.
As I looked ahead to my future, I approached my education with a real sense of purpose and a keen desire to maximize my potential. I knew that through intense studying and tireless efforts, I could excel on the university entrance examination and earn a spot in Hanoi University of Technology (HUT), one of Vietnam's best universities. At that time, I felt a mix of pride in what I had accomplished and an eagerness to expand my intellectual horizons. I also expected a new active air as well as a new method of learning at the higher education. However, when the time came to begin my first day at HUT, I felt an acute sense of disappointment. Walking through the campus to classes, I encountered many nervous and tired eyes. After the teacher entered, he introduced himself quickly and gave my class the term catalog. Looking at the catalog, I did not believe my eyes. With only one experiment per month, dull lectures constituted most of the work. As I watched the teacher dictate notes, I felt as though I had not progressed from high school. Therefore, just after one month of this, I became frustrated by the lack of academic dynamism at HUT, and I began to lose my passion for earning a degree from HUT.
I continued to live this rather limiting and upsetting existence until the fateful day that I attended an American educational exhibition. Immediately impressed by how I saw American higher education described, my mind fixated on the presentation when I made my way back home. In the coming weeks, I spent a lot of time searching the Internet to gather information about the higher education in the United States. The more I explored, the more I become interested in American colleges and universities. I dreamed about learning from famous professors and next to ambitious and intelligent students from around the world. I wanted to engage the creative curriculums and test the outer limits of my own skills and abilities. So, in my mind, a dream of studying in America began.
I knew, though, that if I want to make this dream a reality, I have to become completely proficient in English. In order to do so, I began reading a lot of English books and periodicals, and this task, quite unintentionally broadened my horizons and sparked my curiosity about myriad subjects. Thus, gradually, I have developed my opinions about a wide range of topics, and enjoyed discussing them to both understand the underlying issues as well as defend my arguments. They are the methods of learning that I have awaited at an academic environment, where professors encourage students to express themselves and articulate their viewpoints.
In addition to having found out the prospect of studying abroad, I have discovered several important things. Firstly, I realize that I cannot succeed in this struggle without the support of my family, and in this regard I feel quite fortunate because my parents approved of my ideas and supported my decisions. Looking back on my life, I recognized the great degree to which my parents have encouraged me whenever I got into trouble and made me feel confident that I could succeed in school and in life. They have made many sacrifices for me so that I could have the best things. Secondly, I feel quite lucky and proud for having wonderful friends. Ms Linh assisted me a great deal, working long hours with me to hone and perfect my English skills as well serving as a comforting presence in my life during difficult periods. My friend Duc Anh supplied me with a lot of helpful information about English books as well as American colleges and Binh encouraged in my choice by sending me at least one inspiring message every day. Understanding the scope and commitment of my support network gave me an enormously uplifting feeling that has seen me through the ambitious endeavor to study in America.
The past year has presented me with real challenges, but it has also revealed some very essential things that I might otherwise have taken for granted or have never even noticed. From a frustrated and timid student, I have grown into an active and vigorous one. Having an obvious aim to pursue, a happy family to buttress me at hard times and wonderful friends to share happiness and sadness, I think I have found the meaning of life.