How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future? Please address with some specificity your own wishes and how they relate to Chicago.
[b]When I think of University of Chicago all my dreams seem to come alive and somehow collide into each other making everything in my head more coherent and clear. My desired for higher education is tremendous, I want to follow the steps of my brother, who was the first in my family to go to college as well as to major in business. University of Chicago has stood out in front of my eyes not only for its worldwide renowned and prestigious MBA business program but also for its humbleness and its deep relationship with its students and faculty. Although I haven't been able to go and visit the university's campus, I have looked up online and have fallen in love with it, its structure and venetian architecture have capture my unconsciousness and satisfied my love for art as well. In addition to this, I see University of Chicago a challenge, as a challenge that makes you work hard and put effort into things that you want aim to achieve. I want to challenge myself, and UChicago is what I need. My interests on the business field can be satisfied and expanded with university of Chicago. As I prepare to take the biggest and most important step on my life, I can't think of any other university that can give me more strength and support than University of Chicago. [
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CAN YOU GUYS HELP ME AND SEE ID THIS IS GOOD ENOUGH FOR UCHICAGO
BE HARSH IM OPENMINDED
[b]When I think of University of Chicago all my dreams seem to come alive and somehow collide into each other making everything in my head more coherent and clear. My desired for higher education is tremendous, I want to follow the steps of my brother, who was the first in my family to go to college as well as to major in business. University of Chicago has stood out in front of my eyes not only for its worldwide renowned and prestigious MBA business program but also for its humbleness and its deep relationship with its students and faculty. Although I haven't been able to go and visit the university's campus, I have looked up online and have fallen in love with it, its structure and venetian architecture have capture my unconsciousness and satisfied my love for art as well. In addition to this, I see University of Chicago a challenge, as a challenge that makes you work hard and put effort into things that you want aim to achieve. I want to challenge myself, and UChicago is what I need. My interests on the business field can be satisfied and expanded with university of Chicago. As I prepare to take the biggest and most important step on my life, I can't think of any other university that can give me more strength and support than University of Chicago. [
HELPPPPPPPPPP PLEASEEEEE
CAN YOU GUYS HELP ME AND SEE ID THIS IS GOOD ENOUGH FOR UCHICAGO
BE HARSH IM OPENMINDED