Hi, I am an international student applying northwestern with engineering major.
My English isn't perfect so there may be some or many grammatical mistakes throughout.
Please criticize me all you want. I would really appreciate your help.
Thank you!!
What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying - that make you want to attend the University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified?
Ranked number 13 in the nation, Northwestern University, to me, is more than just a number. It is a gateway to my future. Ever since I moved to America, I have constantly reminded myself "California is not the whole representation of America." I am growing anxious to explore something new and "American": different people, suburban setting, historically renowned city, or simply put, Chicago. However, I did not have the luxury to do this because of financial difficulties. Facing the biggest transition of my life, I find this moment a great opportunity to quench my curiosity. Located in close proximity to the downtown, Evanston possesses both the vibrancy of the city and tranquility of a small college town; thereby providing perfect location for me.
The prominent reason why I choose engineering over mathematics in the first place is because I am totally mesmerized by its limitless applications. Northwestern engineering department definitely acknowledges this and tries to make full use of students' knowledge outside of the institute. By directly connecting students and clients, The McCormick School of Engineering's Co-op programs provide its students vital experiences which is one thing that can no be taught in the classroom. For a future engineer who strives to make a sustainable world, McCormick's commitment to produce better people before making engineers seemed identical to my ultimate goal of making world a better place. Whether it be creating sustainable water solutions for a Honduran village or building water pumps in Phillipines, I am overly excited to be able to apply my knowledge to help those in need. Moreover, Northwestern itself sets a great example for the students by employing the "green power," demonstrating that the commitment is an act not a word. Such action gave me the impression of how McCormick's ideal is embodied by the whole university, not just the engineering department.
The Wildcat is perfect embodiment of Northwestern University. The liveliness of student body matches the ferocity but also the delicacy of wildcats. Not to mention prestigious athletic programs and variety of intramural teams, the undergraduates continue many interesting and very unique traditions in the campus: Painting The Rock to advertise campus organizations, Primal Scream to keep their morale high before excruciating finals week, dance marathon to raise millions of dollars for various charities, and Dillo day to put all the work aside momentarily and fully enjoy the university. Such vitality and uniqueness within the campus differentiates Northwestern from all the other top universities. Excellency in academics, phenomenal college town, great energy of wildcats: What could I ask for more?
My English isn't perfect so there may be some or many grammatical mistakes throughout.
Please criticize me all you want. I would really appreciate your help.
Thank you!!
What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying - that make you want to attend the University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified?
Ranked number 13 in the nation, Northwestern University, to me, is more than just a number. It is a gateway to my future. Ever since I moved to America, I have constantly reminded myself "California is not the whole representation of America." I am growing anxious to explore something new and "American": different people, suburban setting, historically renowned city, or simply put, Chicago. However, I did not have the luxury to do this because of financial difficulties. Facing the biggest transition of my life, I find this moment a great opportunity to quench my curiosity. Located in close proximity to the downtown, Evanston possesses both the vibrancy of the city and tranquility of a small college town; thereby providing perfect location for me.
The prominent reason why I choose engineering over mathematics in the first place is because I am totally mesmerized by its limitless applications. Northwestern engineering department definitely acknowledges this and tries to make full use of students' knowledge outside of the institute. By directly connecting students and clients, The McCormick School of Engineering's Co-op programs provide its students vital experiences which is one thing that can no be taught in the classroom. For a future engineer who strives to make a sustainable world, McCormick's commitment to produce better people before making engineers seemed identical to my ultimate goal of making world a better place. Whether it be creating sustainable water solutions for a Honduran village or building water pumps in Phillipines, I am overly excited to be able to apply my knowledge to help those in need. Moreover, Northwestern itself sets a great example for the students by employing the "green power," demonstrating that the commitment is an act not a word. Such action gave me the impression of how McCormick's ideal is embodied by the whole university, not just the engineering department.
The Wildcat is perfect embodiment of Northwestern University. The liveliness of student body matches the ferocity but also the delicacy of wildcats. Not to mention prestigious athletic programs and variety of intramural teams, the undergraduates continue many interesting and very unique traditions in the campus: Painting The Rock to advertise campus organizations, Primal Scream to keep their morale high before excruciating finals week, dance marathon to raise millions of dollars for various charities, and Dillo day to put all the work aside momentarily and fully enjoy the university. Such vitality and uniqueness within the campus differentiates Northwestern from all the other top universities. Excellency in academics, phenomenal college town, great energy of wildcats: What could I ask for more?
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