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5. "Difficulty need not foreshadow despair or defeat. Rather achievement can be all the more satisfying because of obstacles surmounted."
I had been Puck's master only for the last year. She is a young dog, specifically a German shepherd. Playing with her I always pretended to understand what her thoughts were. We see dogs and pets in general always in vacant mood, as if they do not think at all. This raised on me a, perhaps simple, question: Why do we have to struggle and pets, as puck, have the most quiet life ever?
Obstacles must ,or have to, come on our way otherwise no achievement can be attained. Just think about science, without any challenge, any unknown path, it can't develop. This is difficulty , an unknown path that has to be discovered. Its mysterious nature fears us. We do not know what to expect and usually it is more comfortable staying with the few certainties we have than searching new ones. Simply walking around I realize how the way we face difficulties defines our future: an old man wanders in the park ruminating on his youth, a guy is under effect of drugs, because he was too weak in facing big or small problems or a honest business man has arrived to the peak of his career thanks to his constancy and perseverance. I strongly believe that the more you dare, the furthest you get. One has to have the strength to push away the fright of breaking down, I guess despairs are simply psychological concepts which impede us to keep trying. However they give the opportunity to discover, to bring into question our ideas and securities, carrying with it the only real satisfaction, which is made of failures and accomplishments. This is the only way I know to be a better person in the future and to attain goals one puts oneself. At the end Puck's tranquility is not such a great philosophy of life for a human being.
Do I have to tell something about my experiences?? or is this also ok??
5. "Difficulty need not foreshadow despair or defeat. Rather achievement can be all the more satisfying because of obstacles surmounted."
I had been Puck's master only for the last year. She is a young dog, specifically a German shepherd. Playing with her I always pretended to understand what her thoughts were. We see dogs and pets in general always in vacant mood, as if they do not think at all. This raised on me a, perhaps simple, question: Why do we have to struggle and pets, as puck, have the most quiet life ever?
Obstacles must ,or have to, come on our way otherwise no achievement can be attained. Just think about science, without any challenge, any unknown path, it can't develop. This is difficulty , an unknown path that has to be discovered. Its mysterious nature fears us. We do not know what to expect and usually it is more comfortable staying with the few certainties we have than searching new ones. Simply walking around I realize how the way we face difficulties defines our future: an old man wanders in the park ruminating on his youth, a guy is under effect of drugs, because he was too weak in facing big or small problems or a honest business man has arrived to the peak of his career thanks to his constancy and perseverance. I strongly believe that the more you dare, the furthest you get. One has to have the strength to push away the fright of breaking down, I guess despairs are simply psychological concepts which impede us to keep trying. However they give the opportunity to discover, to bring into question our ideas and securities, carrying with it the only real satisfaction, which is made of failures and accomplishments. This is the only way I know to be a better person in the future and to attain goals one puts oneself. At the end Puck's tranquility is not such a great philosophy of life for a human being.
Do I have to tell something about my experiences?? or is this also ok??