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Never gonna give you up - Cal Tech supplement


LoneLee 4 / 12  
Dec 26, 2016   #1
Caltech students have long been known for their quirky sense of humor, whether it be through planning creative pranks, building elaborate party sets, or even the year-long preparation that goes into our annual Ditch Day. Please describe an unusual way in which you have fun. (200 word max)

Never gonna give you up. Never gonna let you down. Never gonna run around and desert you. Yes, I did just Rick-Roll the person who holds my future in their hands and I'm proud of it. Rick-Rolling people is one of my favorite hobbies, but I don't get the opportunity too often. If it did it all the time then people would start expecting it, and that would ruin the effect. That's why I limit myself to only the most appropriate moments, when people don't expect it the most. For example, during mic checks before the spring show, or during the final slam poetry session of AP Lang.

But none of those will come close to what I'm planning now. The previous classes' senior pranks have been rather lackluster: moving desks outside, putting balloons everywhere, or just writing "BOW DOWN" everywhere in chalk. I plan on showing them all up by Rick-Rolling the entire school. I am, unfortunately, in the midst of getting approval to take over the school's TV station and potentially P.A system, depending on how well it can transmit music. But once I've broken through my school's bureaucracy, my school will never forget the immortal words of Rick Astley: "Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down, never gonna run around and desert you."

Any feedback so welcome. Thank you
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,864 4788  
Dec 26, 2016   #2
Hahaha! Andy, this is one heck of a way to spend your free time. Rickrolling is certainly going to turn you into a master of pranks, one of the more memorable ones at Cal Tech if you manage to get admitted. A reference to FLOTUS Melania Trump rickolling the audience when she gave her speech at the RNC would probably add to the humor of the situation. She rickrolled a whole convention center! Which could probably serve as the basis or explanation for your school wide rickrolling idea. Yeah, I think that will add humor to the situation and make the reviewer anticipate the outcome of your own rickrolling scenario. Try to avoid redundancy in the essay though. Don't close it using the same lyrics to the song. Try to find another line or stanza that would make for a fitting conclusion to your response. I am still laughing while I read what you wrote.


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