'a great education for a low cost,' Virginia Tech Application

So I have to write three "optional" questions in under 250 words to help me get into VT. My grades are a little less than average and im still waiting to take my SAT. I truly think that I have a good chance into getting into Virginia Tech with early decision. OK so my first response is to "What are the top five reasons you want to attend Virginia Tech?"

Virginia Tech has all of the characteristics that i look for in a great university. When looking for a prospective school I first look at the location of the school, VT has a great location in Blacksburg. It is very reassuring to know that the Blacksburg police department and the Virginia Tech Police department work together to make sure the community is safe. Secondly I look at the National ranking of the School, at 71 I know that i would be receiving an excellent education. Third, I look at the average class size, with a 16:1 student teacher ratio I would have a better relationship with my professor enhancing my chances learning more. Fourth, I look to see what majors they offer for their undergraduates, with my dream of owning my own business, I know that the Pamplin College of Business would be a giant leap toward my dreams. Last I look at the tuition cost, Virginia Tech's low tuition I could have the opportunity to receive a great education for a low cost. Virginia Tech is a great school, and I am honored to have the opportunity to be considered.

Please help, All suggestions are helpful!!
Thank you

When looking for a prospective school I first look at the location of the school, VT has a great location in Blacksburg.

I'm not a pro at this.. but maybe try, "When looking for a prospective school, I first consider its location and I feel like I would fit in well at Blacksburg ."

Third, I look at the average class size, with a 16:1 student teacher ratio I would have a better relationship with my professor enhancing my chances learning more.

Maybe...
"Third, I take in consideration the average class size. I know that VT's 16:1 student to teacher ratio will allow me to have a better relationship with my professors, enhancing my chances of learning."

Fourth, I look to see what majors they offer for their undergraduates. With my dream of owning my own business, I know that the Pamplin College of Business would be a giant step toward my dreams.

^ just some grammar/idiom stuff?
I feel like "step" fits better than "leap", but that's just me, and I'm no pro :p

Last, I look at tuition. VT's low tuition would give me the opportunity to receive a great education for a low cost.