Can you please grade my essay, give feedback, and tell me how it is overall. This only has to be one paragraph. The college said that the paper does not have to be the traditional 5 paragraph essay since it is on 250 words or less. Thanks.
Question: Why are you interested in Illinois Institute of Technology? (250 words or less)
I was continuously searching and searching for notable universities in Illinois that would suit my choice of going into pre-med. Finally, I saw it. IIT, a school not only filled with intellectual, open-minded students and staff but also programs great for pre-medical studies. I was intrigued by the facts and decided to apply to IIT.
IIT has endless opportunities for students who want to study medicine. I am exuberant to take courses that not only incorporate medical techniques and skills, but also how technology is incorporated to provide efficient, live-saving procedures. Courses such as anatomy, pathology, psychology, critical thinking in public health, and communication help teach vital skills necessary to become a good physician. Subsequently, I am interested in joining AMSA IIT. This organization would help me learn more about the different paths of medicine, the tips and tricks of becoming successful in medical school, and proper communication with patients and their families. Also, I will make new friends who have the same aspirations I have. Finally, I know that IIT has affiliations with many schools and hospitals. IIT has partnered with Rush Medical Center and Midwestern University ensuring that best learning, hands on experience. My cousin who went to IIT told me that the school has many opportunities for students who are interested in pursing a major in anything.
Hearing all the programs and organizations IIT has to offer, I am ready to join the IIT community and take advantage of the opportunities provided there.
Question: Why are you interested in Illinois Institute of Technology? (250 words or less)
I was continuously searching and searching for notable universities in Illinois that would suit my choice of going into pre-med. Finally, I saw it. IIT, a school not only filled with intellectual, open-minded students and staff but also programs great for pre-medical studies. I was intrigued by the facts and decided to apply to IIT.
IIT has endless opportunities for students who want to study medicine. I am exuberant to take courses that not only incorporate medical techniques and skills, but also how technology is incorporated to provide efficient, live-saving procedures. Courses such as anatomy, pathology, psychology, critical thinking in public health, and communication help teach vital skills necessary to become a good physician. Subsequently, I am interested in joining AMSA IIT. This organization would help me learn more about the different paths of medicine, the tips and tricks of becoming successful in medical school, and proper communication with patients and their families. Also, I will make new friends who have the same aspirations I have. Finally, I know that IIT has affiliations with many schools and hospitals. IIT has partnered with Rush Medical Center and Midwestern University ensuring that best learning, hands on experience. My cousin who went to IIT told me that the school has many opportunities for students who are interested in pursing a major in anything.
Hearing all the programs and organizations IIT has to offer, I am ready to join the IIT community and take advantage of the opportunities provided there.