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A portrait of the crucifix, arranged Catholic books, a simple white wall. It is my first day at the Ulsan University Hospital. All the volunteers are gather here in Padre's room. Before our volunteer group, help the patients, we pray to God and take a moment silence. After prayer, Sr. Shin says to me, "I think that this is tough to you. But, I am guarantee that if you finish successfully, it is the most valuable experience to you. However, do not be afraid about this job. I will pray for you. You're the best high school student to me." I nodded what she said and left the Padre's room door. Before I enter the Intensive care unit, I think of the billions of situations that may occur.
As I entered Intensive Care Unit, I see that people are moving busily to serve patients effectively. When I stand alone in front of door, Mrs. Kim, my co-volunteer, explains what is my job, how should I do, and maintain appropriate behavior in this unit. For about hour, I just watch the nurses work. Suddenly, a nurse request help to me, because she did not know that I am a first time in here. Mrs. Kim helps a nurse and tells me what I should do. Soon, I really start to serve many patients.
Caring for patients, I still remember a patient among thirty people, who only remained silent when I tried conversation. He is hurt seriously because he got a traffic accident, and so, he cannot do anything by himself. My job is to help him keep his body clean. As I work my emotions for him overwhelm me and I say, "I believe that you will be cured soon. I also believe that you will overcome everything. Do not lose your belief. I will pray for you. God will bless you."
He keeps his silence as I talk to him and soon faster. His leg little bit responded when I am wiping off his leg. I asked Mrs. Kim and she say "many of peoples reflect their leg when we touched there. You just go ahead what you did. You look doing well!"
After I assisted him, I tried to talk to him again and told him that although he had been placed in a bad situation, he would get better soon. When go back home, I get a happy yet weird feeling. I felt that he understands what I am saying and that we had communicated with each other heart to heart. Tomorrow, I am going to hospital to serve patients including him. Before I went into the room, I felt that a surprise would happen. When I entered there, he still had his eyes closed, and could not move from his spot. When proceed to wash him, a smile appears on his face abruptly. I am surprised a little bit, but I realize he is getting better. As I left that day I said, "Sir, unfortunately, today is my last service for you. I learned many valuable life lessons from you. Thank you. And Good bye."
After finished this experience, I got an email from Sr. Shin. She told me that the patient is getting better, now he can talk with other people in intensive care unit. At the moment, I could not believe how he could overcome, but I realize that hope and belief still exist in our society. I learned from this service that I should not lose my belief and hope, when I faced to hard situation to me, because the miracle is always have possibility in everywhere.
Hopefully, you guys try to change this essay to make more better.
p.s. : I'm an international student. And please tell me, how are good this essay for this topic.
Just please write as many as opinions for me. Thank you.
A portrait of the crucifix, arranged Catholic books, a simple white wall. It is my first day at the Ulsan University Hospital. All the volunteers are gather here in Padre's room. Before our volunteer group, help the patients, we pray to God and take a moment silence. After prayer, Sr. Shin says to me, "I think that this is tough to you. But, I am guarantee that if you finish successfully, it is the most valuable experience to you. However, do not be afraid about this job. I will pray for you. You're the best high school student to me." I nodded what she said and left the Padre's room door. Before I enter the Intensive care unit, I think of the billions of situations that may occur.
As I entered Intensive Care Unit, I see that people are moving busily to serve patients effectively. When I stand alone in front of door, Mrs. Kim, my co-volunteer, explains what is my job, how should I do, and maintain appropriate behavior in this unit. For about hour, I just watch the nurses work. Suddenly, a nurse request help to me, because she did not know that I am a first time in here. Mrs. Kim helps a nurse and tells me what I should do. Soon, I really start to serve many patients.
Caring for patients, I still remember a patient among thirty people, who only remained silent when I tried conversation. He is hurt seriously because he got a traffic accident, and so, he cannot do anything by himself. My job is to help him keep his body clean. As I work my emotions for him overwhelm me and I say, "I believe that you will be cured soon. I also believe that you will overcome everything. Do not lose your belief. I will pray for you. God will bless you."
He keeps his silence as I talk to him and soon faster. His leg little bit responded when I am wiping off his leg. I asked Mrs. Kim and she say "many of peoples reflect their leg when we touched there. You just go ahead what you did. You look doing well!"
After I assisted him, I tried to talk to him again and told him that although he had been placed in a bad situation, he would get better soon. When go back home, I get a happy yet weird feeling. I felt that he understands what I am saying and that we had communicated with each other heart to heart. Tomorrow, I am going to hospital to serve patients including him. Before I went into the room, I felt that a surprise would happen. When I entered there, he still had his eyes closed, and could not move from his spot. When proceed to wash him, a smile appears on his face abruptly. I am surprised a little bit, but I realize he is getting better. As I left that day I said, "Sir, unfortunately, today is my last service for you. I learned many valuable life lessons from you. Thank you. And Good bye."
After finished this experience, I got an email from Sr. Shin. She told me that the patient is getting better, now he can talk with other people in intensive care unit. At the moment, I could not believe how he could overcome, but I realize that hope and belief still exist in our society. I learned from this service that I should not lose my belief and hope, when I faced to hard situation to me, because the miracle is always have possibility in everywhere.
