What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field - such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities - and what you have gained from your involvement.
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Furthermore, due to my enthusiasm for the subject, I always converse with my organic chemistry teacher who has a doctorate degree and discerns my sincere desire for learning more about biochemistry. I learn plenty from him about physical chemistry and bioorganic chemistry. Moreover, I am hoping to take higher level mathematics courses for my personal intellectual development and to better understand the physics behinds the biomolecules. In addition to my effort in discovering new information about biochemistry, I also volunteer at Kaiser Permanente Medical Center and Hollywood Presbyterian Medical Center, where I learn and provide quality patient care.
Please give me some suggestions or critique on my essay. Thanks in advance.
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Furthermore, due to my enthusiasm for the subject, I always converse with my organic chemistry teacher who has a doctorate degree and discerns my sincere desire for learning more about biochemistry. I learn plenty from him about physical chemistry and bioorganic chemistry. Moreover, I am hoping to take higher level mathematics courses for my personal intellectual development and to better understand the physics behinds the biomolecules. In addition to my effort in discovering new information about biochemistry, I also volunteer at Kaiser Permanente Medical Center and Hollywood Presbyterian Medical Center, where I learn and provide quality patient care.
Please give me some suggestions or critique on my essay. Thanks in advance.