Discuss a problem that we are currently facing in Pakistan. Include possible solutions in your discussion (350 words).
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Terrorism, Religious genocide,Corruption,Expensiveness & Load-shedding.With high coverage in media,these are some of the known big problems which our nation is suffering through.As Markus Zusak said: "Big things are often just little things that people notice". So There is another dilemma I would like to talk about, which haven`t got any special attention yet ,neither from higher chairs nor from public.
3 years ago when I got admission in a popular public school,due to personal interest in psychological studies,I started trying to observe and understand our diverse-mooded community,supported by the fact of having every kind of friends from lowest to highest economical classes. And the shocking thing I figured out was that Drugs could be the next Big threat to the reputation and well being of our nation and country,To be particular, specially the Usage and access to Drugs by male Teenagers.
As to my personal experience and information, at least 3-4 out of every 100 boy high school students have direct links/access to hashish and alcohol dealers/hotspots. It`s popularity index is increasing at such a pace that i have seen ,in person, students secretly taking up hash even in classrooms while hiding it inside their geometry boxes, pen-caps.A huge proportion of our upcoming generation is being hunted by this curse.
Neglectfulness and carelessness by both teachers and parents is also involved in it`s promotion,As majority of it`s victims are those who did`nt got enough attention or politeness from parents and who were regularly mistreated or insulted by teachers in classrooms,So they choose these things for The attention demand and any kind of appraisal by the other fellows.
Banning the Shisha cafes was an appreciable step by Govt. as these places had an important role in encouraging drug community but it haven`t been completely successful due to side-support of high command some police officers.So Govt. need to take more strict and effective steps for finding and closing of places promoting such traditions.Also teachers and parents need to have deep checks & to be more involved,friendly and polite towards their child`s life specially during their adolescent period.Wide Promotion of sports would also give an effective impact on reduction of this black industry.
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Terrorism, Religious genocide,Corruption,Expensiveness & Load-shedding.With high coverage in media,these are some of the known big problems which our nation is suffering through.As Markus Zusak said: "Big things are often just little things that people notice". So There is another dilemma I would like to talk about, which haven`t got any special attention yet ,neither from higher chairs nor from public.
3 years ago when I got admission in a popular public school,due to personal interest in psychological studies,I started trying to observe and understand our diverse-mooded community,supported by the fact of having every kind of friends from lowest to highest economical classes. And the shocking thing I figured out was that Drugs could be the next Big threat to the reputation and well being of our nation and country,To be particular, specially the Usage and access to Drugs by male Teenagers.
As to my personal experience and information, at least 3-4 out of every 100 boy high school students have direct links/access to hashish and alcohol dealers/hotspots. It`s popularity index is increasing at such a pace that i have seen ,in person, students secretly taking up hash even in classrooms while hiding it inside their geometry boxes, pen-caps.A huge proportion of our upcoming generation is being hunted by this curse.
Neglectfulness and carelessness by both teachers and parents is also involved in it`s promotion,As majority of it`s victims are those who did`nt got enough attention or politeness from parents and who were regularly mistreated or insulted by teachers in classrooms,So they choose these things for The attention demand and any kind of appraisal by the other fellows.
Banning the Shisha cafes was an appreciable step by Govt. as these places had an important role in encouraging drug community but it haven`t been completely successful due to side-support of high command some police officers.So Govt. need to take more strict and effective steps for finding and closing of places promoting such traditions.Also teachers and parents need to have deep checks & to be more involved,friendly and polite towards their child`s life specially during their adolescent period.Wide Promotion of sports would also give an effective impact on reduction of this black industry.