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This is Georgia Tech's 1000 character essay. I was wondering if anyone could give me suggestions on how to make the essay smoother or more interesting as well as any grammatical errors. Thanks so much!
I want you to imagine a person. This person has lived the entirety of their lives in towns that consist of a maximum of 4,000 citizens, at a college that takes a literal two minutes to walk to class. This person has never truly been challenged academically nor has she had many opportunities to take advantage of. This person is itching to conduct the biological research she has always dreamed of. This person is me.
Georgia Tech, for one, has a challenging curriculum that excites me to no end. This school would provide me with resources over and beyond what I need in order to be able to initiate biological research. Georgia Tech is a school of rigor, however, it is also a school full of life and community. On my campus visit to Georgia Tech, I could feel the energy in the air. I watched as a game of Quidditch was initiated across the way from a booth about healthy life styles. I would, without a doubt, become involved with this school until I could no other place would feel as at home as Georgia Tech.
This is Georgia Tech's 1000 character essay. I was wondering if anyone could give me suggestions on how to make the essay smoother or more interesting as well as any grammatical errors. Thanks so much!
I want you to imagine a person. This person has lived the entirety of their lives in towns that consist of a maximum of 4,000 citizens, at a college that takes a literal two minutes to walk to class. This person has never truly been challenged academically nor has she had many opportunities to take advantage of. This person is itching to conduct the biological research she has always dreamed of. This person is me.
Georgia Tech, for one, has a challenging curriculum that excites me to no end. This school would provide me with resources over and beyond what I need in order to be able to initiate biological research. Georgia Tech is a school of rigor, however, it is also a school full of life and community. On my campus visit to Georgia Tech, I could feel the energy in the air. I watched as a game of Quidditch was initiated across the way from a booth about healthy life styles. I would, without a doubt, become involved with this school until I could no other place would feel as at home as Georgia Tech.