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I was very nervous. My hands were shaking and my heart beat faster. I was praying to God for the best. I did not want to get embarrassed in that big platform. I was the next person to go up on the stage to perform. It was the first show of my life. It was 2001, a show arranged for the students of my school, which was to be broadcasted on TV. After few minutes my turn came. All those stage lights were blinding my eyes, and those cameras in front of my face were like monster to me. I started singing neglecting all my fear. I fought my greatest fear that day in front of that big camera and all those people standing around me. Everyone clapped until I left the stage.
I was only six years old when I started my singing. I remember the excitement of my first singing class. Singing has made me passionate, determined and confident. I still remember one of my audience's comments, which has influenced my life. After finishing my performance, she told me "You have the God gifted power to make others happy through your singing. Try to use that power and you will get love in return". This is such an influencing line to make me more confident in my work. I get the most happiness when everyone admires me after my performance.
My most favorite activity besides school is singing. It is the reflection of my soul. I am very passionate about my singing. I have learned many lessons from it. Participation in many competitions has taught me the importance of will power and the way to stand out in the crowd. It's not only good talent needed for winning. A winner needs strong will and own satisfaction. I have obtained those powers, which have made me winner.
I have gone through many experiences while singing. It has influenced my personal life. Every time I sing, I feel the same excitement as a four-year-old kid feels at the first day
of school. I learn new things every time from it. Singing is a part of my life. I can make others happy which makes me cheerful as well. I want to continue my singing. I always consider singing as my teacher. Music has shaped me today as a matured person. I have learned passion, determination and confidence from it. I will make the use of all the lessons learned in each step of my life.
I was very nervous. My hands were shaking and my heart beat faster. I was praying to God for the best. I did not want to get embarrassed in that big platform. I was the next person to go up on the stage to perform. It was the first show of my life. It was 2001, a show arranged for the students of my school, which was to be broadcasted on TV. After few minutes my turn came. All those stage lights were blinding my eyes, and those cameras in front of my face were like monster to me. I started singing neglecting all my fear. I fought my greatest fear that day in front of that big camera and all those people standing around me. Everyone clapped until I left the stage.
I was only six years old when I started my singing. I remember the excitement of my first singing class. Singing has made me passionate, determined and confident. I still remember one of my audience's comments, which has influenced my life. After finishing my performance, she told me "You have the God gifted power to make others happy through your singing. Try to use that power and you will get love in return". This is such an influencing line to make me more confident in my work. I get the most happiness when everyone admires me after my performance.
My most favorite activity besides school is singing. It is the reflection of my soul. I am very passionate about my singing. I have learned many lessons from it. Participation in many competitions has taught me the importance of will power and the way to stand out in the crowd. It's not only good talent needed for winning. A winner needs strong will and own satisfaction. I have obtained those powers, which have made me winner.
I have gone through many experiences while singing. It has influenced my personal life. Every time I sing, I feel the same excitement as a four-year-old kid feels at the first day
of school. I learn new things every time from it. Singing is a part of my life. I can make others happy which makes me cheerful as well. I want to continue my singing. I always consider singing as my teacher. Music has shaped me today as a matured person. I have learned passion, determination and confidence from it. I will make the use of all the lessons learned in each step of my life.