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Improving social skills in a large city - why i chose to apply to UCF


abbymaddox04 1 / -  
Sep 3, 2015   #1
I chose to apply at the University of Central Florida because it is a great college with a beautiful campus, has many majors too choose from, is located in the big city of Orlando, and has a large variety of clubs and sororities. As someone who has grown up in a small town, with a population of a mere 12,000 people, I am very excited to explore the world and live in different large cities across the country. When I toured UCF over the summer I quickly fell in love, I was blown away by the size of the campus, all the activities, great opportunities, and the special and welcoming feeling I got from all the people I met there. UCF is one of the biggest campuses in the nation and I strongly look forward to meeting new people and improving my social skills. I am also very interested in the programs offered at UCF, even though I am undecided in my major I know UCF has many branches of schooling for any field I decide to pursue my career in. I am very confident that my ultimate decision for college will be the University of Central Florida, and I am very excited to be a UCF knight.
ap759 1 / 3 1  
Sep 3, 2015   #2
Hi your essay is well written, but there is one point that I would like to mention.

Your title says Improving social skills in a large city but that's not mentioned well enough in the essay.
other than this the essay is really good. Hope you get in.
justivy03 - / 2,366 607  
Sep 4, 2015   #3
- ..has many majors too choose from,..
-it is located in the big city of Orlando,...
- and has a large variety of clubs and sororities for extra curricular activities .
- AsFor someone who has grown up in a small town,...
- ..with a population of a merely 12,000 people,...
- ...world and live in a different largebig cities across the country.
- When I touredhad the chance to visit UCF over...
- ...even though I am undecided inwith my major..
- I know UCF has many branches of schoolingstudy for any field I decide to pursue my career in .
- I am very confident thatof my ultimate decision...

I agree with @ap759, your application essay is written well. You were able to clearly associate your interest with the institution to your pursuit of a brighter future.

Keep it up and the best of luck!!!


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