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"Instead of being the second someone, I want want to be the first me"; NYU Supp



eng_geek 4 / 5  
Dec 12, 2012   #1
A. NYU's global network provides students with hundreds of academic areas of interest for students to cultivate their intellectual curiosity and to help achieve their career goals. Whether you are entirely undecided about your academic plans or you have a definitive program of study in mind, what are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses.

'Instead of being the second someone, I want want to be the first me.' This is what the College of art and sciences at NYU offers. I can participate in a research program of my choice and get help from the extraordinarily helpful and talented faculty. The diversity of students coming from more than 100 different countries would give me a global exposure and help me understand the world needs better for which I intend to work later in my life. I am specially interested in majoring in mechanical engineering and at the same time participating in the research programs so that my first degree course at NYU builds a strong foundation which would help me reach the zenith in my intended field of study. If accepted at NYU I would like to use the numerous opportunities offered by NYU to give back to the society and the institution in the best possible way.

Please add a few lines to this. Thanks!

B. What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or place in the world (a film, book, performance, website, event, location, etc.), and explain its significance to you.

Signals! This is the word that fills me with curiosity and amazement.How does my voice from India reaches USA in no time? How does the exact image reach us while video-conferencing?These are the questions which I would like to answer to myself one day.

The radio signals, sound waves , light waves, satellites are the things which interests me the most and they are a reason behind my intended major. The convoluted mechanism behind these has made my intentions of knowing technology and science deeply stronger and has increased my interest in science , specially physics.

Tell us why you have chosen the above campus (using a maximum of 700 characters-spaces and punctuation included).
I have visited New York once. The day I entered the city I knew that the atmosphere here suites me the best. The cultural diversity that it offers attracts me the most and as an international applicant diversity is what I am looking for in a city and a campus.

NYU New York campus has the most appealing location and as an undergraduate student I would not like to miss the opportunity of staying in a city like New York because the city is so active and energetic that you can never get out of work here.

mzontario 9 / 43  
Dec 13, 2012   #2
This is good!

Only thing is the quote in the beginning. It feels a little bit off and I think it would work without.

Maybe expand a little bit more scientifically into signals?

I really enjoy the tone of your essay, though. Very energetic and chipper. :D


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