Nicolesss 1 / 1 1 Jan 5, 2013 #1Okay so I procrastinated a little bit and I need to have these finished by Monday, I'm running out of room on the contribution part and I've already cut so much.The end kinda stinks a lot so I don't know what to do about itThe prompt it this -Why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech and what do you hope to contribute to our community?No more than 1000 characters.For a school project, I was required to interview an electrical engineer and happened to contact a engineer at Georgia Tech. After my project-related questions were over, I inquired about the university she worked at. Her enthusiasm during the discussion of the institute sparked my own interest and I promised her that I would research the programs that Georgia Tech offered. The school has research opportunities, co-op programs, and a multitude of engineering degrees. I found that through Georgia Tech's top-ranked curriculum, I could explore the engineering disciplines and obtain the real world experience that I need to be successful. Also, Georgia Tech's students have a lot of school pride. From Q&A sessions with recruiters to casual conversations with alumni, everyone I spoke with only had the best to say about the institution.Throughout my college career, I will contribute my dedication and hard-work mentality to help other students and and myself prepare for the expectations of the real world.))))))Thank you for helping :D
lilyraquel52 5 / 25 2 Jan 5, 2013 #2I think the college will like how you have actually spoken with alumni! I would take out how the student have a lot of pride, its random and doesnt the engineering topic here. Dom't say Q&A. Your last sentence is a bit random too. Besides that, not bad at all!! :)