I had some difficulties with this essay. Mainly on getting my thoughts to paper. Basically, I want to help kids and students of all circumstances get an education through programs. I feel as though I've underdeveloped my essay because I feel as though I didn't thoroughly analyze the scope of underprivileged students or kids as well as I could. Please look for any places that I could expand on. Thanks in advance.
PROMPT: Choose an issue of importance to you-the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope-and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, or your generation.
Every time I would pass through the hallways in my school, I see what's in store for the future. The students represent what the future will be run by. Concerning some students, I breathe a sigh of relief because I can see they'll be happy later in life through their eagerness to contribute to the community or even simply excelling in their schoolwork. Such as, that girl in theatre is going to be a Grammy-winning actress or that guy who always knows what's going on in Syria is going to be leading Congress some day. Yet, in some of today's youth, I shake my head because it's so painfully obvious that they could be doing so much more better for themselves. Whether it be by choice or by disadvantages, some of today's youth lack the ability to better themselves.
If they don't have the basic tools to thrive, society's future and the outlook of that particular student isn't looking optimistic. Some children are underprivileged, but there are those that spend their time playing video games, or texting on unnecessarily expensive phones. There's a concern within myself that children aren't paying attention to what is really important in their life which is their future. There needs to be more focus geared towards informing children of books, art, politics, and even more areas to give that child something to work towards that'll benefit themselves and their community in the future. But let's not stop there - what about opening up more programs that help students that have specific problems. Money isn't always an issue in families, but time could be because teenagers would have to cut school or drop out to take care of loved ones. Everyday, kids as young as fourteen would have to sacrifice their life to help their incapacitated parent or to even raise a child (whether it be their child or younger sibling) by themselves. Through these programs, a student could go to school activities or do their homework without worrying about their family because their family would be just fine. Ideally, every teenager and child would have a chance to live happily.
As a child that grew up without many resources to better myself, I understand how important knowledge would be to people, especially to our youth. If a child can't excel, then what's to say that their future would be promising?
PROMPT: Choose an issue of importance to you-the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope-and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, or your generation.
Every time I would pass through the hallways in my school, I see what's in store for the future. The students represent what the future will be run by. Concerning some students, I breathe a sigh of relief because I can see they'll be happy later in life through their eagerness to contribute to the community or even simply excelling in their schoolwork. Such as, that girl in theatre is going to be a Grammy-winning actress or that guy who always knows what's going on in Syria is going to be leading Congress some day. Yet, in some of today's youth, I shake my head because it's so painfully obvious that they could be doing so much more better for themselves. Whether it be by choice or by disadvantages, some of today's youth lack the ability to better themselves.
If they don't have the basic tools to thrive, society's future and the outlook of that particular student isn't looking optimistic. Some children are underprivileged, but there are those that spend their time playing video games, or texting on unnecessarily expensive phones. There's a concern within myself that children aren't paying attention to what is really important in their life which is their future. There needs to be more focus geared towards informing children of books, art, politics, and even more areas to give that child something to work towards that'll benefit themselves and their community in the future. But let's not stop there - what about opening up more programs that help students that have specific problems. Money isn't always an issue in families, but time could be because teenagers would have to cut school or drop out to take care of loved ones. Everyday, kids as young as fourteen would have to sacrifice their life to help their incapacitated parent or to even raise a child (whether it be their child or younger sibling) by themselves. Through these programs, a student could go to school activities or do their homework without worrying about their family because their family would be just fine. Ideally, every teenager and child would have a chance to live happily.
As a child that grew up without many resources to better myself, I understand how important knowledge would be to people, especially to our youth. If a child can't excel, then what's to say that their future would be promising?