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The job you like when you finish your education.



ennyug 2 / 1  
Jun 15, 2015   #1
The job you like when you finish your education.

Of all the jobs I have known, marketer is perhaps the one I think about after my graduation. It seems to be a very hard work in many ways requiring high qualification. Marketing gives me a chance to deep understand real life, know what people want and make them satisfy their demand. In other words, it is just simply learn about the way that human thinking. To meet that, a marketer need to travel a lot, read huge number of books, talk to many people. Fortunately, all of that are my hobbies. Additionally, a basics that any professional marketer always need to have is patience. You can not convince any partner or customer to agree without the patience. Not to mention, it also needs good communication and rich imagination. All of this make marketer is a hard job. Besides, it is also an interesting job that pretty suitable for me in future. Today, thus, i will try my best day by day to be a good marketer in future.

justivy03 - / 2265  
Jun 17, 2015   #2
- Of all the jobs I have known, marketermarketing is perhaps the one I think about after my graduation.

- It seems to be a very hard work and in many ways requiring high qualification.

- Marketing gives me a chance to deepdeeply understand real life, know what people want and make them satisfy their demand.

- In other words, it is just simply learnlearning about the way that human thinkingthink .

- Additionally, athe basics that any professional marketer always need to have is patience.

- You can notcannot convince any partner or customer to agree without the patience.

- All of this makemakes a marketer jobis a hard job.

- Besides, it is also an interesting job that is pretty suitable for me in future.

- Today, thus , i will try my best day by day to be a good marketerin marketing in the future.

Enn, as you can see most of your sentences have one or two corrections, this is because the word choice is not making sense or is lacking a few kicks in it. I suggest doing a practice that really works for me, read the sentence out loud and when if they don't sound good, there's definitely something to fix.

- proof reading is also a good practice

Keep writing

Cheers!!!


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