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Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.
"Krista, please look through this performance list and see if its alright." my board mate asked. This was my first major task as Vice President of Kermesse committee, our school's spring festival. As an experienced committee member for 2 years, I was elected as president of the board. At first I refused, doubting my ability. The president saw the hesitation in my eyes and comforted me, "Don't worry, I'm sure you'll be a great leader if you put your heart to it." With his words in mind, I decided to challenge myself and take on the leadership role.
For half a year, my life revolved around Kermesse. Everyday after school I met up with the president and our teacher to discuss about the logistics of festival till dark. Along with the committee, We painted the poster, created advertisements, persuaded teachers to sponsor us. Many times, I faced rejection and tons of questions. I ensured everyone on the committee completed their part accurately and on time. All these in 3 months! With only the help of 30 other committee members!
I was confident all the hard work would pay off and Kermesse would run smoothly. To my horror, I find out last minute that our school choir was chosen to represent San Francisco to participate in Chicago's Festival of Gold and I would not be able to attend Kermesse. My heart sank. Our choir put all our effort in during the year to prepare for the competition. In addition, I was one of the lead singers of the choir. I couldn't let my choir team down. Nor could I let my committee down. I was torn between what to do. To go to choir? or stay for Kermesse?
For days, I felt as if there was a huge rock on my back, weighing me down. I couldn't focus during Kermesse meetings and during choir practice. I changed my choice back and forth, weighing both pros and cons. In the end, I decided to try to look for a flight that would fly off to Chicago after Kermesse. However, flights were very full during that time and I was waitlisted for the late flight.
I needed a backup plan. I informed my teacher in charge and my committee members about the situation at hand; they were all very understanding. I checked that all preparation work was done, went to each sub committee and overlooked their work. I also communicated with the security staffs and ticketing staff to give them instructions and solution to possible problems that might arise. I also ran several rehearsals for performances to guarantee that the performances will be flawless that day. I also appointed a friend to be my substitute for the day of Kermesse. I explained to her my responsibilities at Kermesse, and told her to call me immediately if anything happens.
Fortunately, I was able to take the late flight to travel to Chicago on my own. I run around the campus on the day of Kermesse, monitoring everything. Kermesse was a huge success. We received feedbacks from teachers claiming that we did a great job organizing the performances, food and even games. That night, exhausted, I hopped on the plane alone to join my fellow choir mates in Chicago.
Being an adult is presenting yourself to the world with all of your strengths, and your vulnerabilities, regardless of any insecurities. Responsibility and consequence both become a major impetus in most all of our decisions. Being an adult secures us great freedom and power in this world, but with that power and freedom we must always assume responsibility for our actions.
Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.
"Krista, please look through this performance list and see if its alright." my board mate asked. This was my first major task as Vice President of Kermesse committee, our school's spring festival. As an experienced committee member for 2 years, I was elected as president of the board. At first I refused, doubting my ability. The president saw the hesitation in my eyes and comforted me, "Don't worry, I'm sure you'll be a great leader if you put your heart to it." With his words in mind, I decided to challenge myself and take on the leadership role.
For half a year, my life revolved around Kermesse. Everyday after school I met up with the president and our teacher to discuss about the logistics of festival till dark. Along with the committee, We painted the poster, created advertisements, persuaded teachers to sponsor us. Many times, I faced rejection and tons of questions. I ensured everyone on the committee completed their part accurately and on time. All these in 3 months! With only the help of 30 other committee members!
I was confident all the hard work would pay off and Kermesse would run smoothly. To my horror, I find out last minute that our school choir was chosen to represent San Francisco to participate in Chicago's Festival of Gold and I would not be able to attend Kermesse. My heart sank. Our choir put all our effort in during the year to prepare for the competition. In addition, I was one of the lead singers of the choir. I couldn't let my choir team down. Nor could I let my committee down. I was torn between what to do. To go to choir? or stay for Kermesse?
For days, I felt as if there was a huge rock on my back, weighing me down. I couldn't focus during Kermesse meetings and during choir practice. I changed my choice back and forth, weighing both pros and cons. In the end, I decided to try to look for a flight that would fly off to Chicago after Kermesse. However, flights were very full during that time and I was waitlisted for the late flight.
I needed a backup plan. I informed my teacher in charge and my committee members about the situation at hand; they were all very understanding. I checked that all preparation work was done, went to each sub committee and overlooked their work. I also communicated with the security staffs and ticketing staff to give them instructions and solution to possible problems that might arise. I also ran several rehearsals for performances to guarantee that the performances will be flawless that day. I also appointed a friend to be my substitute for the day of Kermesse. I explained to her my responsibilities at Kermesse, and told her to call me immediately if anything happens.
Fortunately, I was able to take the late flight to travel to Chicago on my own. I run around the campus on the day of Kermesse, monitoring everything. Kermesse was a huge success. We received feedbacks from teachers claiming that we did a great job organizing the performances, food and even games. That night, exhausted, I hopped on the plane alone to join my fellow choir mates in Chicago.
Being an adult is presenting yourself to the world with all of your strengths, and your vulnerabilities, regardless of any insecurities. Responsibility and consequence both become a major impetus in most all of our decisions. Being an adult secures us great freedom and power in this world, but with that power and freedom we must always assume responsibility for our actions.
