Topic: Florida State University is more than just a world-class academic institution preparing you for a future career. We are a caring community of well-rounded individuals who embrace leadership, learning, service, and global awareness. With this in mind, which of these characteristics appeals most to you, and why?
Here is my essay: Leadership, learning, service and global awareness are the common factors that to be a well-rounded and successful person, but in my opinion, learning appeals most me. I don't have a stunning appearance on the outside, however, my inner aspect is quite unique. I came from china, a mysterious country on the other side of the earth. I have to say, fall in love with this beautiful country are destined in my life. Times flies, two years after the first time step on the lovely ground of the United States of America, now recall all the things happened in past two years, I am very satisfied what I have done. Two years may be just a couple seasons of some popular TV shows, the transition between sequel and famous previous movies, but for me, this two years had changed my life because of learning, I learned what really learning is. As a full-time high school student, my main duty is school, but is that all learning about? Definitely not, if learning from school give you knowledges, then learning in life is about experience, activities, challenges and pretty much everything you can think of. When I just came to USA, everything has changed: new school, new language, new home, new culture, it's basically just a completely new world. As a new immigrant and student, language obvious is the number thing that obstacle on my way of education, you can imagine how hard is trying to finish a reading assignment without understand the most words in the article. So the only option for me at that time is to learn, in order to carry out my goal. I am not Einstein, I just like anyone else on this planet, so in this situation, I need spend double or even treble time to finish same works of anyone else, and not even that, I challenge myself with some harder course like honors and AP, the result of my effort is obvious, pass the FCAT with 4 out of 5 is I can never Imagined. What I learned and efforts, are no one can take away, learning can't be measured, but the result is obvious, learning let me explore the deepest of human potential; learning made me grow faster, get ready for the future challenges. I will never stop learning in my life, hope Florida State University will be the path of my future education .
Can i have get any opinion or help from you guys? thanks very much
Here is my essay: Leadership, learning, service and global awareness are the common factors that to be a well-rounded and successful person, but in my opinion, learning appeals most me. I don't have a stunning appearance on the outside, however, my inner aspect is quite unique. I came from china, a mysterious country on the other side of the earth. I have to say, fall in love with this beautiful country are destined in my life. Times flies, two years after the first time step on the lovely ground of the United States of America, now recall all the things happened in past two years, I am very satisfied what I have done. Two years may be just a couple seasons of some popular TV shows, the transition between sequel and famous previous movies, but for me, this two years had changed my life because of learning, I learned what really learning is. As a full-time high school student, my main duty is school, but is that all learning about? Definitely not, if learning from school give you knowledges, then learning in life is about experience, activities, challenges and pretty much everything you can think of. When I just came to USA, everything has changed: new school, new language, new home, new culture, it's basically just a completely new world. As a new immigrant and student, language obvious is the number thing that obstacle on my way of education, you can imagine how hard is trying to finish a reading assignment without understand the most words in the article. So the only option for me at that time is to learn, in order to carry out my goal. I am not Einstein, I just like anyone else on this planet, so in this situation, I need spend double or even treble time to finish same works of anyone else, and not even that, I challenge myself with some harder course like honors and AP, the result of my effort is obvious, pass the FCAT with 4 out of 5 is I can never Imagined. What I learned and efforts, are no one can take away, learning can't be measured, but the result is obvious, learning let me explore the deepest of human potential; learning made me grow faster, get ready for the future challenges. I will never stop learning in my life, hope Florida State University will be the path of my future education .
Can i have get any opinion or help from you guys? thanks very much