My only resort was the public library.
My only resort was the public library. (Just add a bit about why this was your only resort. Something like: "...because it provided the tools I needed to complete my assignments and...") It was my second home because I could escape to magical places by reading books."
2nd paragraph should begin..."The children section was and still is full but the teen section is almost isolated" because it is a new topic.
..." just want to get money to
assimilate tokeep up with
the latest trends."NIce start here. Just remember to begin new paragraphs with new topics because it makes for a clearer understanding for the reader. Also, when proofing your draft, it is a good idea to elaborate with more details in an area where the reader is left wondering why? or what? as in paragraph one here. Good luck!