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Living or travel experience essay - 'my grandfather told'



Bernard1 2 / 2  
Nov 12, 2012   #1
Before my grandfather died he was a farmer, he used to carry his old radio to the farm. I could always love to walk with him in the village and he could always tell me, "If someone can make this radio you like, why can't you make one for me?" I did not understand what he meant because I was young, but as I was growing up I knew that what my grandfather told meant a lot in the path of my career.

After my grandfather died I had no one to support me as the way he did, it was hard for me to recover to my normal senses. My academic progress went down and down every single semester, not only that even life in school became harder and harder for me. I was very hard to give up although the higher the grade I went the greater the school work I had. It reached a time when I decided to stand out myself and fight a good fight for what I had wanted for. Most of my time in school I spent in the computer laboratory and my computer teacher could give me some work type because sometimes he had a lot of works example, typing school reports, writing academic progress. So I began to love working with him because I loved computers,

karthik 2 / 3  
Nov 15, 2012   #2
This needs lot of rephrasing and more insight.You should spend more time on it buddy!


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