Hi,
I wrote a supplemental esay and I want to use it for two schools. I wrote about making smoothies, something I love to do-:). I need help on content, flow and idea of this short supplement. Thanks in advance!
Write about something that you love to do?-Yale
What makes you happy?- Tufts
I love the creamy texture, sublime taste, and balanced consistency. I love making smoothies. What I love even more is the opportunity these drinks give to expand my fruit horizons. I am not the typical apple/banana smoothie lover; I devour in the extraordinary fruits from other countries such as "Korean pears" from Korea, "ackee fruits" from Jamaica, and "Indian gooseberries" from India because these fruits give me insight about the culture of the country they are raised in. Just like a smoothie finds its taste when it is combined with a unique group of fruits, I find myself fulfilled when I learn about different cultures around the world. During my leisure times, I often go to the library to read about cultures in encyclopedias. I imagine myself celebrating the Seollal with Korean people or playing the drums with people in Africa. Learning about other cultures and special fruits allows me to move outside of my own bubble, and find new ways of approaching problems. I value other cultures, just like I value the perfect combination of fruits in my smoothie.
I wrote a supplemental esay and I want to use it for two schools. I wrote about making smoothies, something I love to do-:). I need help on content, flow and idea of this short supplement. Thanks in advance!
Write about something that you love to do?-Yale
What makes you happy?- Tufts
I love the creamy texture, sublime taste, and balanced consistency. I love making smoothies. What I love even more is the opportunity these drinks give to expand my fruit horizons. I am not the typical apple/banana smoothie lover; I devour in the extraordinary fruits from other countries such as "Korean pears" from Korea, "ackee fruits" from Jamaica, and "Indian gooseberries" from India because these fruits give me insight about the culture of the country they are raised in. Just like a smoothie finds its taste when it is combined with a unique group of fruits, I find myself fulfilled when I learn about different cultures around the world. During my leisure times, I often go to the library to read about cultures in encyclopedias. I imagine myself celebrating the Seollal with Korean people or playing the drums with people in Africa. Learning about other cultures and special fruits allows me to move outside of my own bubble, and find new ways of approaching problems. I value other cultures, just like I value the perfect combination of fruits in my smoothie.