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Prompt:Describe a setback that you have faced. How did you resolve it? How did the outcome affect you? If something similar happened in the future, how would you react?
I was in Mr.Mason's fourth grade class memorizing the states and their capitals for the test at the end of the week. My class was quiet with each of the students in their own solemnity focusing hard on the fact the Dover was the capital of Delaware. Then an announcement broke the silence, it was our principal saying that there is an import message that all teachers need to receive and if they could send a student down to the office to retrieve it. My entire class suddenly jumped up in excitement each of us raising a hand hoping Mr.Mason would choose us. However Mr.Mason rejected us all and said that he would go down and retrieve this "urgent message" during the break. As my classmates and I all mumbled our discontent we reluctantly returned back to our studies. Upon my classes entrance I saw that the principal, vice principal, and the priest Father Dennis. After several moments Father Dennis stepped forward and said, "There has been a terrible accident and we have gathered you here today because we feel that you are old enough and mature enough to know." He paused for a moment, swallowed hardly and continued with, "Two planes have crashed into the twin towers in New York City, and many people are hurt. If you all could please stand up and join me in prayer." Returning back to class it was all the students could talk about, questions about who and why were circulating as we all were unaware of how such a horrible thing could happen.
Later that day I went home and there my aunt, uncle, and parents were gathered around the TV as the talk about these attacks continued. I saw the pain in their eyes but at that moment I was unaware of why it was there. Several days later that it was revealed that the attacks were the results of a small extremist Islamic group in the Middle East and it was then that my world was flipped upside down. That day my individuality as a Jordan Christian was now transformed to a Muslim terrorist. It was that day that my neighbor came to my home in drunken state yelling words of hate at my father and my family as I stood behind my father in tears the men standing behind my neighbor remained unmoved with their heads in what I hope was shame. That moment I grew ashamed of my culture and became very reserved unwilling to share my opinion, it was as if a part of me was afraid to come out.
Unfortunately I cannot remove racism from the world but rather do my best to educate people that not all Arabs are Muslims and Muslims are not terrorists. After years of blaming myself for not being what other people accepted I began to read and learn about different religions and cultures and the racism they overcame. I grew hungry for information about religion, culture, and an education. University of Michigan's diverse campus will surround me in an environment where people are willing to learn about my culture and religion and also willing to teach about theirs because the more understanding in the world the less hate there will be.
Prompt:Describe a setback that you have faced. How did you resolve it? How did the outcome affect you? If something similar happened in the future, how would you react?
I was in Mr.Mason's fourth grade class memorizing the states and their capitals for the test at the end of the week. My class was quiet with each of the students in their own solemnity focusing hard on the fact the Dover was the capital of Delaware. Then an announcement broke the silence, it was our principal saying that there is an import message that all teachers need to receive and if they could send a student down to the office to retrieve it. My entire class suddenly jumped up in excitement each of us raising a hand hoping Mr.Mason would choose us. However Mr.Mason rejected us all and said that he would go down and retrieve this "urgent message" during the break. As my classmates and I all mumbled our discontent we reluctantly returned back to our studies. Upon my classes entrance I saw that the principal, vice principal, and the priest Father Dennis. After several moments Father Dennis stepped forward and said, "There has been a terrible accident and we have gathered you here today because we feel that you are old enough and mature enough to know." He paused for a moment, swallowed hardly and continued with, "Two planes have crashed into the twin towers in New York City, and many people are hurt. If you all could please stand up and join me in prayer." Returning back to class it was all the students could talk about, questions about who and why were circulating as we all were unaware of how such a horrible thing could happen.
Later that day I went home and there my aunt, uncle, and parents were gathered around the TV as the talk about these attacks continued. I saw the pain in their eyes but at that moment I was unaware of why it was there. Several days later that it was revealed that the attacks were the results of a small extremist Islamic group in the Middle East and it was then that my world was flipped upside down. That day my individuality as a Jordan Christian was now transformed to a Muslim terrorist. It was that day that my neighbor came to my home in drunken state yelling words of hate at my father and my family as I stood behind my father in tears the men standing behind my neighbor remained unmoved with their heads in what I hope was shame. That moment I grew ashamed of my culture and became very reserved unwilling to share my opinion, it was as if a part of me was afraid to come out.
Unfortunately I cannot remove racism from the world but rather do my best to educate people that not all Arabs are Muslims and Muslims are not terrorists. After years of blaming myself for not being what other people accepted I began to read and learn about different religions and cultures and the racism they overcame. I grew hungry for information about religion, culture, and an education. University of Michigan's diverse campus will surround me in an environment where people are willing to learn about my culture and religion and also willing to teach about theirs because the more understanding in the world the less hate there will be.
