For UR, what makes you a good fit? Give suggetions for my work.

#1 What makes the University of Rochester a good fit for you? In answering, identify your sources of information, including any conversations you've had with Rochester faculty, staff, students, or alumni.

All the information from my high school counselor shows University of Rochester is a good fit for me for its remarkable education superiority, interesting cultural variety, lively student life, and attention-grabbing location.

The unparalleled and outstanding Take Five Scholars Program allows me to enrich my education in order to add my name to the list of individuals who have graduated and had unimaginable success. Meet students of 30 nationalities cultivates my ability to fit in a new environment, without parents or old friends. Over 200 student clubs give me the chance to explore and develop interests, step out of the old comfort zone and integrate within new community. Moreover, the city of Rochester will have unlimited employments and internships available to me.

Thank you very much!~~

Good afternoon.

Because the prompt asks for specific sources included in the essay, I suggest you contact your counselor to get this information and then include it in the essay. If your word count allows, I suggest you expand upon the Take Five program and include some details, making your essay stronger.

Regards,
Gloria
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Thank you for your suggestion,but in fact the school said the answer have to be in 125 words or less.So I do not know what to do.

I suggest that you definitely include the publication information (at least one source) and remove any "filler" from the essay that you can.

Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com