Watch your comma use. Only put in a comma before a conjunction if whatever's following the conjunction is a sentence by itself.
That's right! It is a COMPOUND SENTENCE when it has 2 complete sentences connected by a conjunction. Use google to interpret what all that means if you (anyone) are not sure.
Not all writers do this, but...
Example: Strunk and White recommend a comma after the conjunction in a compound sentence, and I agree!
(above is an example. "I agree" is a complete sentence.)
Here, no comma is necessary:
Diversity is the quintessential element to all higher education and job environments.
In all
decisions matters, diversity is the key to successful d
ecision makin g.
During the September of 2009 I began the search for a job after having my newly acquired license, as the need for a car in my spread out suburban community. ---hey, what is going on here. Look at this sentence, and tell me what is wrong with it.
Boarders Borders
Let this be the first sentence of a new paragraph:
The
Idea idea seemed very new to me
, and in essence the kind of living I had never been exposed to. I showed up one ...
This essay needs an intro paragraph and a conclusion paragraph. Both should express the same MAIN IDEA. Add a para at the beginning and end, and cut content out of the middle to make room if necessary.
Google this: how to write thesis statement essay
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