the medical health aspect of nursing, CRNA degree

I am fascinated with the medical health aspect of nursing and aspire to one day help many patients in need. I look forward to becoming a nurse anesthetist so I can have the ability to work side by side with anesthesiologists and surgeons. Obtaining a degree in nursing will allow me to do so. To reach this goal, I need to attend college and then earn my Master's degree after attending Certified Registered Nurse Anesthetist programs. In preparing myself for my future career I have taken courses such as calculus, chemistry, physiology, psychology, and medical heath science care in high school. These classes have given me the opportunity to have a sample of what will soon come in college. I plan to attend a 4-year university so I can receive my degree in Bachelor in Science in Nursing. I plan on working very hard and have a larger foresight then the one I had in high school so I can do the best I can and achieve a high GPA. After I graduate the first four years of college, I plan on doing any criteria need basis so I can begin to attend graduate programs and obtain my CRNA degree. I am motivated by the idea of helping thousands of people annually. I love to help a person in need. It makes me feel better as a person. This motivating factor is pushing me harder and harder to that goal.

This is a nice theme, Courtney.

I want to tell you that it is important to write in paragraphs instead of just using one paragraph. If you have more than a few sentences, use at least 2 paragraphs. It helps the reader to think clearly about the theme.

What I see in this essay is an assertion that you are a serious student dedicated to helping others. BUT I think you can show something more. Read some articles about anesthesiology and recent developments related to your interests... and read about philosophy of nursing. Read some articles, and let your essay show that you are interested in current topics in the field. It's easy and interesting! :-)