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'Medicine and Biology with Specialization' - Why BU Supplement



br2pi5 10 / 70  
Jan 1, 2013   #1
Please help! How can I make this phrase better??

BU was always in my mind --a prestigious institution who any high school graduate would be happy to attend-- but it was only until I began researching about the academics and courses offered that I seriously considered it.

AND

My past work experiences have strengthened my reasons to pursue a career in Medicine and by completing a BA in Biology with Specialization I will not only focus in what I am most interested but I will create a strong foundation for my graduate studies as well as take advantage of the opportunities to participate in active research in many fields.

OP br2pi5 10 / 70  
Jan 1, 2013   #2
"with the experiences I pursued" is there a better verb other than pursue (because you don't pursue experiences, right?) HELP!
elkstar 1 / 2  
Jan 1, 2013   #3
BU was always on my mind --a prestigious institution who any high school graduate would be happy to attend-- but it was only until I began researching about the academics and courses offered that I seriously considered it.

AND

My past work experiences have strengthened my reasons to pursue a career in the medical field and by completing a BA in Biology with Specialization I will not only focus in what I am most interested but I will create a strong foundation for my graduate studies as well as take advantage of the opportunities to participate in active research in many fields.

just a suggestion maybe
OP br2pi5 10 / 70  
Jan 1, 2013   #4
My past work experiences have strengthened my reasons to pursue a career in the medical field and by completing a BA in Biology with Specialization I will not only focus in what I am most interested but I will create a strong foundation for my graduate studies as well as take advantage of the opportunities to participate in active research in many fields.

any suggestion how to make this phrase shorter??
elkstar 1 / 2  
Jan 1, 2013   #5
br2pi5
With my past work experiences in the medical field and by completing a BA in Biology with Specialization, I will not only focus in what I am most interested but I will create a strong foundation for my graduate studies by taking advantage of the opportunities to participate in active research in many fields.

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