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BU was always in my mind --a prestigious institution who any high school graduate would be happy to attend-- but it was only until I began researching about the academics and courses offered that I seriously considered it.
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My past work experiences have strengthened my reasons to pursue a career in Medicine and by completing a BA in Biology with Specialization I will not only focus in what I am most interested but I will create a strong foundation for my graduate studies as well as take advantage of the opportunities to participate in active research in many fields.
BU was always in my mind --a prestigious institution who any high school graduate would be happy to attend-- but it was only until I began researching about the academics and courses offered that I seriously considered it.
AND
My past work experiences have strengthened my reasons to pursue a career in Medicine and by completing a BA in Biology with Specialization I will not only focus in what I am most interested but I will create a strong foundation for my graduate studies as well as take advantage of the opportunities to participate in active research in many fields.