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A thousand and one doubts floated through my head as I anxiously sat in the front seat of my mothers giant SUV. We pulled up to the front of the Miami Rowing Club and as I got out of the car, a cool January breeze chilled my body, which did anything but ease my nerves. The last thing I expected was that I would find myself in a room with what would become my family for the next two years of my life. I never imagined that through rowing I would learn the values of discipline, loyalty, courage, dedication, and most importantly, teamwork. I now see myself as a vastly different person who can take on any challenge that is put forth in front of her, and who can encounter different experiences with open arms. I do not see rowing as another tedious after school activity, but as something that i sincerely enjoy doing.
also,***please edit****
A thousand and one doubts floated through my head as I anxiously sat in the front seat of my mothers giant SUV. We pulled up to the front of the Miami Rowing Club and as I got out of the car, a cool January breeze chilled my body, which did anything but ease my nerves. The last thing I expected was that I would find myself in a room with what would become my family for the next two years of my life. I never imagined that through rowing I would learn the values of discipline, loyalty, courage, dedication, and most importantly, teamwork. I now see myself as a vastly different person who can take on any challenge that is put forth in front of her, and who can encounter different experiences with open arms. I do not see rowing as another tedious after school activity, but as something that i sincerely enjoy doing.
