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'Mirroring him in my life, World Cup' about others rather telling his influence on me



milan28 1 / -  
Nov 23, 2012   #1
CAN ANYONE EDIT MY ESSAY??????????????????

Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.

It was world cup 2002. I first noticed XXX. The most devoted player who played to create opportunity for others. The young midfielder in XXX team and his style of playing change my perspective toward the life. My inner voice rose to brilliant conclusion that I need to have similar principle in whichever field I attain. Optimism set in within me. Somewhere on my young mind I admired his altruistic principle. I understood that kindness and helpfulness are the way to succeed in life. I realized hard work, coordination, selflessness and dedication are the key which leads us to the victory.

XXX, familiar name with all the football lovers is revered for his altruistic endeavor in his game. His ability on the football pitch to create opportunities to others and coordinate with them has led him and his team to numerous titles and placed him among the most decorated footballer of all the time. His contribution to the national team as well as his club has made them reputable and helped them to stand out among other teams. . His smartness has led many other players to become the celebrated footballer of this time.XXX, the best footballer of this generation would have been nothing without him. His immaculate range of passes and magnificent vision has led his team to stand almost close to invincibility. Playing for the most reputed team his desire does not include of being highest scorer or the most popular player rather he devotes himself on assisting others through his intelligent passes.

His behavior presents an epitome of morality. Watching his game I learned helping others is more than a life time opportunity and self sacrifice ultimately results to self promotion. I promised to myself that I would not be stepping back to help others though whatever circumstances arise. My ambition does not include materialistic desire and prosperous life. Rather my aspirations involve creating cooperative environment and promoting the feeling of brotherhood. Within my dreams and aspiration I am seeking for an opportunity to encourage the people to give up their narrow outlook to creating cooperative environment. I wish I could make the difference in the world incorporating his principles.

Today a sense of satisfaction and pleasure engulfs me when I help physically disabled person to cross the road, donate my pocket money to the homeless people and unite people on the fund raising for the orphans, homeless and war effected children. I am pleased when I lead thousands of people carrying a play card written" live and let live" and walking on the street to collect fund for the flood victims.

Today he is on my mind as a kind, honest, hardworking and dedicated person. He empowered my feeling towards social services made me determined to carry on social service and promote the feeling of brotherhood. His principle to consider other's success as his own made me to adopt him as a role model. He is not only the source of entertainment but also helped me to set my moral compass, learn what it truly means to be human and left me with the aspiration for the future mankind.

His personality is the one I like to mirror in my own life.

pawan457 2 / 6  
Nov 25, 2012   #2
i guess it is a good essay but you need to concentrate writing about you rather than the player....
i guess you need to cut off your second paragraph and write about how he influenced you rather writing about him.


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