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Hi Taymour -- again!
I do grasp the essence of your essay, but I don't think that you explained yourself thoroughly in the text so that the readers can understand what you mean. Perhaps it might be best if you include some of the ways in which these backgrounds influenced you and your beliefs, not just that they did. Do you understand?
--Mark :)
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muslimMuslim family that celebrates Christmas every year as if it is ours explains how diversity is in my blood. My grandmother Lola Jean is an American Christian who moved with
her husband to Egypt in the mid 1930s in search for a place to raise a family.
Other than my background, my experiences also play
ed a major role in determining my identity.
however, I believe I
am nothave not been tested academically.