My name is Ayie. I am from Selangor which is located in the city centre of Malaysia. I have 5 siblings and I'm the youngest one. My father worked as farm settler and my mother is housewife. I have completed my degree in business and have been waiting for the graduation day. I'm 24 years old. At leisure time, I like jogging and stretching. It will helps me to sustain my weight and toned muscles. My previous job is in sales and marketing company where I have to study about marketing plan, disciplinary new products and do some researches about company's backgrounds. In my future career, I want to be a prominent banker.I love to take challenges and would see the real capability of me to compete with those who are already in banking line. Yet, I have planned to pursue my study at master level in UK but I need to brush up my English first. Now, I'm jobless and a job seeker and I have a lot of interviews session in banking, accounting and auditing. In a nutshell, whatever I do, I will try my best to achieve remarkable achievements that I have ever did. Be a sanguine person would be a more confident and perfectionist. Thank you.
My name is Ayie. I am from Selangor; check my basic English
in the citycentral areacentre of Malaysia.
5 siblings
write the numbers under 10 in words
my mother is a housewife
I'm 24 years old.
write this sentence as the second sentence just after giving your name and before talking about your siblings and your parents.
At leisure time, I like jogging and stretching
suggestion:"jogging and stretching are my favorite leisure activities."
researches
"research" is an uncountable noun and you cannot use it in plural form.
in the UK
My name is Ayie. I am from Selangor which is located in the central area of Malaysia. I have 5 siblings and I'm the youngest one. My father works as farm settler and my mother is a housewife. I have completed a degree in business and have been waiting for the graduation day. I'm 24 years old. At leisure time, I like jogging and stretching, it will help me to sustain my weight and tone down muscles. My previous job was in sales and a marketing company where I had to study about a marketing plan, disciplinary new products and do some research about company's backgrounds. In my future carer, I want to be a prominent banker.I love to take challenges and would see the real capability of me to compete with those who are already in banking line. Yet, I have planned to pursue my study at master level in UK but I need to brush up my English first. Now, I'm jobless and a job seeker and I have a lot of interviews session in banking, accounting and auditing. In a nutshell, whatever I do, I will try my best to achieve remarkable achievements that I have ever did. Be a sanguine person would be a more confident and perfectionist. Thank you.
I fixed your grammer, now it sounds more flowing.
Good Luck, hope you find a job soon.
I fixed your grammer, now it sounds more flowing.
Good Luck, hope you find a job soon.
