Please tell us what appeals most to you about columbia and why?
(1500 characters)
"Why Columbia?"
I dream. My dream is of a future where nature and science exists in perfect harmony. My dream is of a world where every voice is heard and every opinion considered. My dream is to grow and to help others grow. My dream is to lead. My dream is Columbia.
Columbia is, undoubtedly, an institution par excellence. The stellar academics and research facilities, under the guidance of some of the best professors in the world and the amazing 'CORE', which embodies in a student all the necessary qualities of a well rounded individual, along with its majestic campus and its location in the heart of the world's heart, make Columbia perfect. And for me, numero uno.
What appeals most to me about Columbia though, is the warmth and exuberance it reflects, the ideals by which it stands, and the precision with which it hones its determined students into skilled individuals- individuals who thing big, think smart, work hard and raise the standards of society, individuals who not only aspire to make a difference in the world but diligently work towards a better future, individuals who lead.
"...And hence, Columbia."
(1135 characters)
Is it too short? Too vague? Too general?
Any feedback would be really appreciated. : )
(1500 characters)
"Why Columbia?"
I dream. My dream is of a future where nature and science exists in perfect harmony. My dream is of a world where every voice is heard and every opinion considered. My dream is to grow and to help others grow. My dream is to lead. My dream is Columbia.
Columbia is, undoubtedly, an institution par excellence. The stellar academics and research facilities, under the guidance of some of the best professors in the world and the amazing 'CORE', which embodies in a student all the necessary qualities of a well rounded individual, along with its majestic campus and its location in the heart of the world's heart, make Columbia perfect. And for me, numero uno.
What appeals most to me about Columbia though, is the warmth and exuberance it reflects, the ideals by which it stands, and the precision with which it hones its determined students into skilled individuals- individuals who thing big, think smart, work hard and raise the standards of society, individuals who not only aspire to make a difference in the world but diligently work towards a better future, individuals who lead.
"...And hence, Columbia."
(1135 characters)
Is it too short? Too vague? Too general?
Any feedback would be really appreciated. : )