I still got long ways to go the word limit i think is from 250-300 and I'm well over.. and I don't know if I answered the question right..
suggestions to make it a stong, short and sweet essay? PLEASE PLEASE HELP
Northwestern Statement: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying - that make you want to attend the University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified?
Marching through the Arch at the Northwestern University, I am here to make a difference. Throughout my life, I have walked in the overflowing streets of Seoul, in the wilderness leading my group of autistic friends, through the corridors of St. Joseph's Home, in the March for Life in Washington D.C., and in the fast moving hallways of schools in Korea, Australia, California, and Illinois. Everywhere I go, I'm intrigued by the various reactions of the people as I flash them smiles. This is just one way of how I communicate, and I cannot imagine living in a world where there is no interaction among people. At the same time, it fascinates me that this is all workings of an organ that takes up merely three pounds of my body, the brain. A tiny section of it called the Broca's Area has allowed the speeches of the greatest historical figures like Gandhi and Wilberforce.
Now as I walk through the Frances Searle Building, I see curious people like me. With the support of these people at the Northwestern University School of Communication, I plan to major in Human Communication Sciences with a special focus on Learning Disabilities. I am attracted to the depth of academic study of human communicative processes that the NU SoC offers. It emphasizes the basic science principles tracing down to the roots of all human communication and cognition. This will introduce me to clinical issues and research findings that pertain to disorders of communication and learning like autism, which I have had a first- hand experience with from volunteering at Miral School. Fortified from taking part in autism research at the Neurodevelopmental Disabilities Laboratory at Northwestern University, I will be able to make my goal of empowering the communicatively disabled members of our society a reality. I know that education at NU will enable me to further pursue a never-ending inquiry of communication and neuroscience. I am aware that there is no special formula for me to reach out to all the people in need. I must take steps, however many there may be. As of now, I'm ready to take the first step that lies in Northwestern School of Communication.
Do I need to come up with more specifics and get rid of details? make it more insightful?
suggestions to make it a stong, short and sweet essay? PLEASE PLEASE HELP
Northwestern Statement: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying - that make you want to attend the University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified?
Marching through the Arch at the Northwestern University, I am here to make a difference. Throughout my life, I have walked in the overflowing streets of Seoul, in the wilderness leading my group of autistic friends, through the corridors of St. Joseph's Home, in the March for Life in Washington D.C., and in the fast moving hallways of schools in Korea, Australia, California, and Illinois. Everywhere I go, I'm intrigued by the various reactions of the people as I flash them smiles. This is just one way of how I communicate, and I cannot imagine living in a world where there is no interaction among people. At the same time, it fascinates me that this is all workings of an organ that takes up merely three pounds of my body, the brain. A tiny section of it called the Broca's Area has allowed the speeches of the greatest historical figures like Gandhi and Wilberforce.
Now as I walk through the Frances Searle Building, I see curious people like me. With the support of these people at the Northwestern University School of Communication, I plan to major in Human Communication Sciences with a special focus on Learning Disabilities. I am attracted to the depth of academic study of human communicative processes that the NU SoC offers. It emphasizes the basic science principles tracing down to the roots of all human communication and cognition. This will introduce me to clinical issues and research findings that pertain to disorders of communication and learning like autism, which I have had a first- hand experience with from volunteering at Miral School. Fortified from taking part in autism research at the Neurodevelopmental Disabilities Laboratory at Northwestern University, I will be able to make my goal of empowering the communicatively disabled members of our society a reality. I know that education at NU will enable me to further pursue a never-ending inquiry of communication and neuroscience. I am aware that there is no special formula for me to reach out to all the people in need. I must take steps, however many there may be. As of now, I'm ready to take the first step that lies in Northwestern School of Communication.
Do I need to come up with more specifics and get rid of details? make it more insightful?