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You are nothing but a failure!; Describe the world you come from - UC's PS



ktang96 2 / 1  
Sep 14, 2013   #1
Question: Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

"Don't even go to college! You're a piece of garbage! You are nothing but a failure!" (Good way to start?)
Stupid. Unintelligent. Dense. Failure. Growing up I always felt like I was alone; not physically, but mentally. No one ever believed in me; they always thought I would be a failure. As an educated young woman, I always thought I was smart until these words start coming into my head. What blows my mind the most was that these words didn't come from strangers, it came from the people that I love the most, my family.

Because of the one B I had on my report card junior year, my family thought I was a failure. My mom and sister constantly yelled at me everyday for that one B. They forced me into quitting all my extra curricular activities I had going on at school and made me stay home all day to study. National Honors Society, 4.0 GPA Award Recognition, Outstanding Community Service Hours- none of those recognition mattered to them. I was fed up to the point where I just cried because I knew that just staying home all day to study won't get me anywhere.

I have struggled with having a good relationship with my family. Despite the fact that I came from a traditional Asian culture- where having anything lower then an A is failing, my family doesn't understand that I need to be a well rounded student

I was able to overcome the family situation and strive for the best. I was able to motivate myself to get perfect grades. I was able to drive myself to be the first in my immediate family to apply straight to a 4 year university. I created various alternative methods in my life in order to improve. I blocked out all the negativity that are preventing me from striving for the best. Instead of mourning on these negativism, I use it to push myself far beyond the star's limit.

Kalyn17992 9 / 18  
Sep 16, 2013   #2
What blows my mind the most was that these words didn't come from strangers, it came from the people that I love the most, my family.

What blew my mind the most...
dumi 1 / 6793  
Sep 30, 2013   #3
"Don't even go to college! You're a piece of garbage! You are nothing but a failure!" (Good way to start?)

Yes... I like it :) .... gives some hint what you have in your store to reveal :)

As an educated young woman, I always thought I was smart until these words start coming into my head.

.... this one disturbs your flow.... put it a bit differently;
Although I believed I was smart, these words kept disturbing me to holding on to that conviction.

What blows my mind the most was that these words didn't come from strangers, it came from the people that I love the most, my family.

The worst was they didn't come from strangers, but from the very people I love the most, my family.


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