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NYU 5 Supplements "Day with Adam Richman, Haiku..etc"



rawrfest 3 / 4  
Dec 21, 2009   #1
500 Char word count for each

Write a haiku, limerick, or short poem that best represents you.

Green sepals grasp, at
A blossoming rose.
I am bout to bloom.

In the year 2050, a movie is being made of your life. Please tell us the name of your movie and briefly summarize the story line.

America's Worst Job. A little boy grins as he exchanges Pokémon cards on the playground. Another sweet deal. 2015. The boy has grown up and has traded in his cards for companies and his t-shirt for a suit. America's Worst Job details the rise of an investment banker from his humble beginnings of a paper-pushing analyst to CEO of a large banking firm. Surrounded in an environment of ravenous sycophants, can David preserve his morality or will he fall prey to the temptations of Wall St? (489/500)

If you had the opportunity to spend one day in New York City with a famous New Yorker, who would it be and what would you do?

A day with Adam Richman ensures amusement. Our time would comprise of sprinting from one street cart to another, sampling the various delicacies of NYC. From gyros to eggrolls, we would soon cascade with greasy goodness. Our stomachs would further ache from laughter as we retell disastrous recipes fueled by our bizarre imaginations. The streets would reverberate with our loud boisterous laughter. New York City, our own personal playground.

(444/500)

Please tell us what led you to select your anticipated academic program and/or NYU school/college, and what interests you most about your intended discipline.

Stemming from entrepreneurial classes, I gained a rudimentary knowledge of business and its workings. Yet one aspect particularly stuck with me: finance. The combination of mathematics and practicality sent shivers down my spine. Finance was real; it was tangible. Thusly, Stern is the ideal root to future my understanding and depth. Situated in the financial capital of the world, Stern provides not only outstanding internship opportunities but also a peerless erudition in business. (487/500)

Thanks for reading! Please give some criticism!

theotisbeasley - / 1  
Dec 24, 2009   #2
i think you did character count not word count
dizzydaydreams 5 / 26  
Dec 24, 2009   #3
the structure of a haiku is 5-7-5 (syllables) but i think you did 5-5-5 (syllables) so just clear that up.
hodari 2 / 3  
Dec 25, 2009   #4
A little boy grins as he exchanges Pokémon cards on the playground. Another sweet deal.

don't really see the point of this sentence. is this to show that u have a good sense for business?


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