[[essay topic: How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural experiences. ]]
I was once an introvert but my exposure to the outside world led me to break out of my shell. One experience after another helped me improve into being the outgoing woman I am today. Growing up in an urban neighborhood and attending one of the most diverse schools in Jersey City, I do not think I will find it difficult to adjust to your university.
My interest in cosmetology originally evolved during my pre-school years. When I first saw the "Cut-my-hair" Barbie commercials, I was fascinated and wondered how her looks differed all the time. The process intrigued me. I thought it was something interesting that I wanted to do. Little did I know this was the beginning of a new passion. Excelling in cosmetology developed my adaptability. It required me to keep up to date with the latest hair fashion. I developed creativity by coming up with new and different ways to style hair as to reflect a person's individuality. It taught me to relate well and understand people and their needs. When my customer has an idea of what they want to look like, it is my job as a hairstylist to make it a reality. These experiences helped me work with people face-to-face. It is no doubt that taking up this course in high school help start building my communication skills.
While cosmetology molded my desire for a successful future, I am also interested in dancing. I always admired the [Dance team here ex:RAPS organization] and wanted to be a part of it. During my early years, I seemed to fall short of mastering dance skills. I thought I was going to give up. Though I had to undergo struggles making it to the top, my commitment and motivation pushed me to become better and stay focused. I also learned a valuable lesson. "The measure of a person lies in their ability to overcome failure, use it as a fuel for success." I am now a member of the dance troupe, "Urban." We combine different dance backgrounds that are admired from the city, such as hip-hop, break dancing, and popping. Today, we perform in social events and fund raising activities.
Since I was born and raised in America, my parents' country was foreign to me. After many visits to my hometown in Bantay, Philippines, I became very fluent in speaking our native dialect, Ilo Cano. Additionally, I was introduced to the "Bantay Bata" child welfare program. Their goal is to help protect children from child abuse. The lessons I learned during these experiences taught me teamwork and social awareness. They also prepared me for the multicultural environment I will face if accepted at [College here].
During my sophomore year, I was voted class treasurer. It elevated my self-esteem knowing that my classmates trusted me. It was definitely a challenge to be involved in many activities. Along with assisting and organizing events, it helped me polish my interpersonal skills. The responsibilities and trust will serve me well in an independent college surrounding.
With the knowledge and experience I have gained through recognized efforts and social events, I hope to bring these values with me to college. These helped me transform from this young shy girl to this young woman that continues to help people and make a positive impact in their lives. I believe that I can do anything to have [College here] proud of having me as a student. Attending your school can connect me to all aspects of my desired major in communications.
I was once an introvert but my exposure to the outside world led me to break out of my shell. One experience after another helped me improve into being the outgoing woman I am today. Growing up in an urban neighborhood and attending one of the most diverse schools in Jersey City, I do not think I will find it difficult to adjust to your university.
My interest in cosmetology originally evolved during my pre-school years. When I first saw the "Cut-my-hair" Barbie commercials, I was fascinated and wondered how her looks differed all the time. The process intrigued me. I thought it was something interesting that I wanted to do. Little did I know this was the beginning of a new passion. Excelling in cosmetology developed my adaptability. It required me to keep up to date with the latest hair fashion. I developed creativity by coming up with new and different ways to style hair as to reflect a person's individuality. It taught me to relate well and understand people and their needs. When my customer has an idea of what they want to look like, it is my job as a hairstylist to make it a reality. These experiences helped me work with people face-to-face. It is no doubt that taking up this course in high school help start building my communication skills.
While cosmetology molded my desire for a successful future, I am also interested in dancing. I always admired the [Dance team here ex:RAPS organization] and wanted to be a part of it. During my early years, I seemed to fall short of mastering dance skills. I thought I was going to give up. Though I had to undergo struggles making it to the top, my commitment and motivation pushed me to become better and stay focused. I also learned a valuable lesson. "The measure of a person lies in their ability to overcome failure, use it as a fuel for success." I am now a member of the dance troupe, "Urban." We combine different dance backgrounds that are admired from the city, such as hip-hop, break dancing, and popping. Today, we perform in social events and fund raising activities.
Since I was born and raised in America, my parents' country was foreign to me. After many visits to my hometown in Bantay, Philippines, I became very fluent in speaking our native dialect, Ilo Cano. Additionally, I was introduced to the "Bantay Bata" child welfare program. Their goal is to help protect children from child abuse. The lessons I learned during these experiences taught me teamwork and social awareness. They also prepared me for the multicultural environment I will face if accepted at [College here].
During my sophomore year, I was voted class treasurer. It elevated my self-esteem knowing that my classmates trusted me. It was definitely a challenge to be involved in many activities. Along with assisting and organizing events, it helped me polish my interpersonal skills. The responsibilities and trust will serve me well in an independent college surrounding.
With the knowledge and experience I have gained through recognized efforts and social events, I hope to bring these values with me to college. These helped me transform from this young shy girl to this young woman that continues to help people and make a positive impact in their lives. I believe that I can do anything to have [College here] proud of having me as a student. Attending your school can connect me to all aspects of my desired major in communications.
