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Since I was a child I had aspirations of becoming an engineer. A chance to study at Purdue will give me the opportunity to be educated by one of the best faculties and research something
I'm truly enthusiastic about and in the field that truly appeals to me. Meanwhile, it'll grant me an opportunity to interact with people of multiple backgrounds and to participate in numerous activities which'll help me to discover a whole new side of myself. Years at Purdue will turn me from a naive high school boy to a proficient and adept engineer.
----------------------What possible changes can I make to this statement which'll make it even more appealing to the reader----------------------Please help.
Since I was a child I had aspirations of becoming an engineer. A chance to study at Purdue will give me the opportunity to be educated by one of the best faculties and research something
I'm truly enthusiastic about and in the field that truly appeals to me. Meanwhile, it'll grant me an opportunity to interact with people of multiple backgrounds and to participate in numerous activities which'll help me to discover a whole new side of myself. Years at Purdue will turn me from a naive high school boy to a proficient and adept engineer.
----------------------What possible changes can I make to this statement which'll make it even more appealing to the reader----------------------Please help.