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"I Need More Opportunities to Pursue My Passion" - MIT Transfer Essays



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Mar 4, 2022   #1

Please discuss why you are considering transferring from your current college or university.


* (250): Leaving your current institution


After volunteering at a local hospital's TICU, I concluded I did not want to go into pre-med and become a surgeon. I learned from the volunteering experience that I did not have the emotional capacity to continuously see people at their weakest state. Nevertheless, my passion for contributing to health and medicine persisted. With the idea in mind, I began to explore different majors, from engineering to the humanities. It was, however, after I started college with a mostly-exhausted list of possible majors, when computer science came into view.

In retrospect, the best was saved for last. At first, I enjoyed studying computer science because of the sense of accomplishment whenever my code ran according to my design. However, I realized that computer science could also be used to pursue my passion after watching a video about overcoming cancer with artificial intelligence. Things finally seemed to come together; I could contribute to medicine and health by developing AI technologies. I wanted to participate in AI research as an undergraduate and pursue a Ph.D. to become a leading researcher in the field.

I sought research opportunities at (current university), but the facilities and opportunities-especially in computer science-were limited. There were no actively ongoing projects, and the suggested alternative on-campus options were not directly related to my interests. Most off-campus programs only accepted applications from US citizens. If I wanted to pursue research, I figured I had to move to an environment with abundant resources for undergraduate research.

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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15393  
Mar 5, 2022   #2
The paper is very personal in approach. The applicant has truly done his homework regarding what he wants his career path to be and the reason why he believes it should be that way. He should be commended for wishing to create improvements in the healthcare industry in a unique way. However, the soul searching has taken over the whole explanation. The personal considerations should be balanced with his reason for choosing to move to MIT in terms of his academic and career growth. I believe that the essay should be divided into 2 paragraphs each. Every pair focusing on the necessary explanations (why shift courses? Why MIT?) By providing a balanced insight into the 2 questions, the applicant will have a better chance of convincing the reviewer that he deserves a shot to be a MIT transfer student.


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