'packet drink' - the most significant challenge that society faces today? - Stanford

What is the most significant challenge that society faces today?

We buy a packet drink, and we throw it away. We buy another packet drink, and we throw it away as well. And this continues. The society is not aware of the amount of resources needed to make one product. For them, conservation of resources is the government's job and not theirs; absolute inanity.

I'm not really sure if this is okay. I hope people would help me correct the errors and comment on the entire writing. Don't be nice to me, just pour out whatever you feel. THANK YOU :D

We buy a packet drink, and we throw it away. We buy another packet drink, and we throw it again; and this continues. The society is not aware of the amount of resources needed to make one product. For them, conservation of resources is the government's job and not theirs; absolute inanity.

you might want to add the word apathetic somewhere, but do consider the 300 characters limit.

Feel free to ignore my changes. Interesting respond, not straightforward answer but use of imagery of the situation. :)

would you mind reading my respond to the same question?

"I find peer pressure to be the most significant challenge that society faces today. A society's judgements and comments affects an individual's thoughts and actions greatly. They influence one to doubt their dreams and have second thoughts. People today care too much of what others think of them."

thankyou

Thank you very much. Yeah sure, will do the editing.

As for your essay, at first glance, it looks very good. I think the term peer pressure could be replaced with something like, "being afraid of disapproval". Well peer pressure doesn't really address the content of your essay. Other than that, I think the essay is just fine. But do ask more people okay :)

Thank you!