Hey everyone, I am currently trying to apply for a transfer to different UCs and I was hoping someone could take a look at my essay. Any help would be much appreciated. Thank you in advance for all your help!
Prompt: What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field - such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities - and what you have gained from your involvement.
From a very young age, I always knew that my passion for animals would lead me to become a veterinarian, although I have had no formal experience in this field the idea of becoming a veterinarian still envelopes me. This strong desire to become a veterinarian is what impacted me to declare my major in biology. By majoring in biology, I can further my education and come closer to my goal of earning a career in veterinary medicine.
What first led my interest in biology was my father, who has instilled much of his influence on me from his love of animals. Throughout my life my family has had a variety of pets from a toucan to a boa constrictor to even an alligator gar. My dad's interest in animals and the fact that I was surrounded by many pets gave rise to this curiosity of one day helping animals. In addition, going to the veterinarian with my dad to get checkups for my dogs further extended this curiosity making this dream closer than ever as it appeared right in front of my eyes. As I would watch the veterinarian examine and give vaccinations to my dogs it gave me a glimpse of what I could potentially do. I am blessed that I received this possibility from my father to be around so many animals.
So early in my life, but just as important and memorable, I had a second grade project based around what I intended to do when I grew up. This project solidified my intent of becoming a veterinarian because this was the first time I had actually thought about my future. As part of my project, I had to speak face to face and interview a veterinarian. I chose to interview my local veterinarian Dr. Sargious. From the interview, the passionate responses I received from Dr. Sargious about his enjoyment from helping animals encouraged me strongly to continue with this pathway. Although children often change their mind on what they want to do in life, I was positive that becoming a veterinarian would be my goal throughout my education.
My interest of majoring in biology peaked when my little Chihuahua/pug, Lucky, passed away in eleventh grade. My love for him was especially strong because he was not only a pet, but a family member. His death motivated my enthusiasm and desire in becoming a veterinarian so that I could contribute my life to helping other people's beloved pets. By being a veterinarian, I want to give the opportunity for my patients to live healthy and long lives by giving them the best medical treatments I can give. I hope to treat these pets just as if they were human patients in the hospital. As I knew the pain of losing a beloved pet, I understood the importance that veterinarians held.
As I continue to strive to become a veterinarian, I anticipate majoring in biology will give me the insight and preparedness I need for a field in animal medicine. Furthermore, I hope that opportunities will arise where I will be able to be more involved in animal healthcare. Whether it is volunteering at a local animal shelter or becoming an intern at an animal hospital, I will cherish the opportunities that draw me closer to my goals.
Prompt: What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field - such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities - and what you have gained from your involvement.
From a very young age, I always knew that my passion for animals would lead me to become a veterinarian, although I have had no formal experience in this field the idea of becoming a veterinarian still envelopes me. This strong desire to become a veterinarian is what impacted me to declare my major in biology. By majoring in biology, I can further my education and come closer to my goal of earning a career in veterinary medicine.
What first led my interest in biology was my father, who has instilled much of his influence on me from his love of animals. Throughout my life my family has had a variety of pets from a toucan to a boa constrictor to even an alligator gar. My dad's interest in animals and the fact that I was surrounded by many pets gave rise to this curiosity of one day helping animals. In addition, going to the veterinarian with my dad to get checkups for my dogs further extended this curiosity making this dream closer than ever as it appeared right in front of my eyes. As I would watch the veterinarian examine and give vaccinations to my dogs it gave me a glimpse of what I could potentially do. I am blessed that I received this possibility from my father to be around so many animals.
So early in my life, but just as important and memorable, I had a second grade project based around what I intended to do when I grew up. This project solidified my intent of becoming a veterinarian because this was the first time I had actually thought about my future. As part of my project, I had to speak face to face and interview a veterinarian. I chose to interview my local veterinarian Dr. Sargious. From the interview, the passionate responses I received from Dr. Sargious about his enjoyment from helping animals encouraged me strongly to continue with this pathway. Although children often change their mind on what they want to do in life, I was positive that becoming a veterinarian would be my goal throughout my education.
My interest of majoring in biology peaked when my little Chihuahua/pug, Lucky, passed away in eleventh grade. My love for him was especially strong because he was not only a pet, but a family member. His death motivated my enthusiasm and desire in becoming a veterinarian so that I could contribute my life to helping other people's beloved pets. By being a veterinarian, I want to give the opportunity for my patients to live healthy and long lives by giving them the best medical treatments I can give. I hope to treat these pets just as if they were human patients in the hospital. As I knew the pain of losing a beloved pet, I understood the importance that veterinarians held.
As I continue to strive to become a veterinarian, I anticipate majoring in biology will give me the insight and preparedness I need for a field in animal medicine. Furthermore, I hope that opportunities will arise where I will be able to be more involved in animal healthcare. Whether it is volunteering at a local animal shelter or becoming an intern at an animal hospital, I will cherish the opportunities that draw me closer to my goals.