Prompt:
A Penn education provides a liberal arts and sciences foundation across multiple disciplines with a practical emphasis in one of four undergraduate schools: the College of Arts and Sciences, the School of Engineering and Applied Science, the School of Nursing, or the Wharton School. Given the undergraduate school to which you are applying, please discuss how you will engage academically at Penn.
thank you guys! I took all of your comments and synthesized them into an edited version of my essay. I would really appreciate it if you could give it another read:
Throughout high school, computer science has offered me a way to create. Unlike my other classes, which involve reading a textbook and answering questions or solving equations, my computer courses have allowed me to take concepts I learned in class and turn them into software that can be used in the real-world. I remember being so excited when I learned ArrayLists in Java that I went home that night and created an interactive polynomial solver to use in my Precalculus class. The Penn School of Engineering and Applied Sciences' unique academic experience that reaches past the walls of the classroom will fuel my passion for learning beyond the textbook and ultimately allow me to fulfill my dream of creating my own software design company.
Penn professors center their courses around the applications of a material, the type of learning that initially drew me to computer science. One class I look forward to taking, "Intro to Human Language Technology", not only teaches you the Wordnet Processor for Voice Recognition but also its applications in modern-day technology, like iPhone's Siri. In high school, my most enjoyable and intellectually stimulating moments came from hands-on software development with my teacher. Thus, the Summer Undergraduate Research in Engineering Program excites me greatly. By working one-on-one with professors, I will be able to fuel my passion for learning-by-doing and be left with a meaningful product that can be used to help the Penn community.
The Dining Philosophers, Penn's computer science interest group, is an organization I first learned about when I participated in the Philadelphia Classic, a programming competition sponsored by them. The quirky sense of humor and the passion for problem solving I saw in its members show me I would feel right at home in the organization. In addition, their PennApps contest is a competition that will allow me to implement my many ideas for applications, such as an educational Virtual Stock Market for finance students, while also learning about the entrepreneurial aspect of engineering.
Ultimately, the intriguing coursework and the extracurricular opportunities make Penn Engineering a school that will foster my academic growth and makes me eagerly look forward to the next four years.
the only problem is it is about 70 words over the limit, so if there are parts you believe are weaker/could be cut out, please let me know! thanks!
A Penn education provides a liberal arts and sciences foundation across multiple disciplines with a practical emphasis in one of four undergraduate schools: the College of Arts and Sciences, the School of Engineering and Applied Science, the School of Nursing, or the Wharton School. Given the undergraduate school to which you are applying, please discuss how you will engage academically at Penn.
thank you guys! I took all of your comments and synthesized them into an edited version of my essay. I would really appreciate it if you could give it another read:
Throughout high school, computer science has offered me a way to create. Unlike my other classes, which involve reading a textbook and answering questions or solving equations, my computer courses have allowed me to take concepts I learned in class and turn them into software that can be used in the real-world. I remember being so excited when I learned ArrayLists in Java that I went home that night and created an interactive polynomial solver to use in my Precalculus class. The Penn School of Engineering and Applied Sciences' unique academic experience that reaches past the walls of the classroom will fuel my passion for learning beyond the textbook and ultimately allow me to fulfill my dream of creating my own software design company.
Penn professors center their courses around the applications of a material, the type of learning that initially drew me to computer science. One class I look forward to taking, "Intro to Human Language Technology", not only teaches you the Wordnet Processor for Voice Recognition but also its applications in modern-day technology, like iPhone's Siri. In high school, my most enjoyable and intellectually stimulating moments came from hands-on software development with my teacher. Thus, the Summer Undergraduate Research in Engineering Program excites me greatly. By working one-on-one with professors, I will be able to fuel my passion for learning-by-doing and be left with a meaningful product that can be used to help the Penn community.
The Dining Philosophers, Penn's computer science interest group, is an organization I first learned about when I participated in the Philadelphia Classic, a programming competition sponsored by them. The quirky sense of humor and the passion for problem solving I saw in its members show me I would feel right at home in the organization. In addition, their PennApps contest is a competition that will allow me to implement my many ideas for applications, such as an educational Virtual Stock Market for finance students, while also learning about the entrepreneurial aspect of engineering.
Ultimately, the intriguing coursework and the extracurricular opportunities make Penn Engineering a school that will foster my academic growth and makes me eagerly look forward to the next four years.
the only problem is it is about 70 words over the limit, so if there are parts you believe are weaker/could be cut out, please let me know! thanks!